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Lighting the Darkness

Drawn to day's sunlight Behemoth reaches higher Shading his neighbor Light plumbs the depths of darkness Sending prisms of sparkles

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 7:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/20/2012 3:42:00 PM

nice imagery! congrats on your win!

John Freeman

Date: 5/19/2012 8:43:00 PM

Amazing! All of the winners on this list are terrific. Joyce, So is this one a gem, I'm sure Carolyn had a difficult time judging. Agape, Moses

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/19/2012 7:54:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Joyce! Your poem is beautiful. Blessings and love, Rhonda

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/19/2012 3:51:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/19/2012 3:48:00 PM

congrats Joyce, beautiful imagery, harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/19/2012 3:38:00 PM

Enjoyed this very descriptive work..Congrats on your win.Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/19/2012 2:02:00 PM

Prisms of sparkles! Oh u and I think alike, Joyce! I had tho't of a kaleidoscope too! Congrats on this winning write! Writing for Carolyn's contests always challenge my pen!! :) It always pays off! :) Gwendolen

David Williams

Date: 5/19/2012 12:27:00 PM

Joyce congrats on your win..david

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2012 10:26:00 AM

The colors of daybrak shining through the forest are beautifully described, Joyce. Alexa and I congratulate you on your win! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2012 9:12:00 PM

wow, yours is outstanding here. One more question, Joyce. What were you mentioning about -ing rhymes? I like to use those and was thinking, do you have something against them?