LIGHTHOUSE IN THE STORM

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LIGHTHOUSE IN THE STORM* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ amidst the tempest, a beacon stands unyielding, guiding lost sailors waves crash and thunder, yet light pierces through the night, hope against the dark rocks loom, shadows dance, with each flash, courage rekindles, safe harbor awaits *Note: Poem originally published at Poetry Soup in June 2025 then later at creativeramblings.com/writing-prompts/weekly-prompt-13/. This is my original poem.

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Sam Scott

Date: 8/7/2025 10:03:00 PM

I love this one, Sara. Any lighthouse fascinates me and I am reminded and inspired by this. (fav) Blessings S:) x

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/8/2025 5:11:00 PM

thank you, Sam, for your visit and comments. I deeply appreciate the FAV. Have a blessed evening and weekend, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/7/2025 9:28:00 AM

Your poem beautifully captures the essence of perseverance and optimism! dear Sara. It leads readers through stormy emotions, and the metaphor of a lighthouse shines clearly. The elegance and function of a lighthouse are beautifully captured in this poem.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/7/2025 5:22:00 PM

thank you, sir, for your meaningful comments. Glad you appreciated and valued the poem. Grateful for you and your visits, Texas hugs, Sara

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/7/2025 6:29:00 AM

I love lighthouses. This poem is a perfect rendering of their beauty and purpose. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your visit to my poem. Blessings

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/7/2025 5:21:00 PM

I find lighthouses captivating, rich in history and purpose. I appreciate your visit and kind words. Have a blessed evening, Sara

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/7/2025 6:04:00 AM

well penned ~ love the artwork ~ great combo

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/7/2025 5:20:00 PM

many thanks, Line! appreciate you, Sara

Anne Winter

Date: 8/7/2025 5:27:00 AM

Dear Sara, your poem is a stunning portrayal of hope and resilience! The lighthouse metaphor shines brightly, guiding readers through turbulent emotions. The contrast between the storm and the beacon is powerful, reminding us that even in darkness, guidance and hope can pierce through. Beautiful language and captivating rhythm make this piece inspiring and uplifting. This work is sure to touch hearts! Best, Anne

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/7/2025 5:20:00 PM

wow, thank you, Anne, for your visit and all your complimentary words. I appreciate your enthusiasm for my poem. Color me grateful, Sara