sara Etgen-Baker Poet Senryu

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LIGHTHOUSE IN THE STORM

LIGHTHOUSE IN THE STORM*
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amidst the tempest,
a beacon stands unyielding,
guiding lost sailors

waves crash and thunder,
yet light pierces through the night,
hope against the dark

rocks loom, shadows dance,
with each flash, courage rekindles,
safe harbor awaits

*Note: Poem originally published at Poetry Soup in June 2025 then later at  creativeramblings.com/writing-prompts/weekly-prompt-13/. This is my original poem.

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Sam Scott August 7, 2025 at 10:03 PM I love this one, Sara. Any lighthouse fascinates me and I am reminded and inspired by this. (fav) Blessings S:) x sara Etgen-Baker August 8, 2025 at 5:11 PM thank you, Sam, for your visit and comments. I deeply appreciate the FAV. Have a blessed evening and weekend, Sara

Sotto Poet August 7, 2025 at 9:28 AM Your poem beautifully captures the essence of perseverance and optimism! dear Sara. It leads readers through stormy emotions, and the metaphor of a lighthouse shines clearly. The elegance and function of a lighthouse are beautifully captured in this poem. sara Etgen-Baker August 7, 2025 at 5:22 PM thank you, sir, for your meaningful comments. Glad you appreciated and valued the poem. Grateful for you and your visits, Texas hugs, Sara

Eileen Manassian August 7, 2025 at 6:29 AM I love lighthouses. This poem is a perfect rendering of their beauty and purpose. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your visit to my poem. Blessings sara Etgen-Baker August 7, 2025 at 5:21 PM I find lighthouses captivating, rich in history and purpose. I appreciate your visit and kind words. Have a blessed evening, Sara

Line Gauthier August 7, 2025 at 6:04 AM well penned ~ love the artwork ~ great combo sara Etgen-Baker August 7, 2025 at 5:20 PM many thanks, Line! appreciate you, Sara

Anne Winter August 7, 2025 at 5:27 AM Dear Sara, your poem is a stunning portrayal of hope and resilience! The lighthouse metaphor shines brightly, guiding readers through turbulent emotions. The contrast between the storm and the beacon is powerful, reminding us that even in darkness, guidance and hope can pierce through. Beautiful language and captivating rhythm make this piece inspiring and uplifting. This work is sure to touch hearts! Best, Anne sara Etgen-Baker August 7, 2025 at 5:20 PM wow, thank you, Anne, for your visit and all your complimentary words. I appreciate your enthusiasm for my poem. Color me grateful, Sara