Lighthouse

sailor's saviour stands  
              Poseidon’s personnel pose 
         'neath deepening day

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/5/2016 6:05:00 PM

Was this based on the lighthouse picture? Really enjoyed what you came up with ... great alliteration and "sailor's saviour" sounds wonderful.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2016 11:25:00 PM

SNEHA, Congratulations on your "Second Chance #2 WIN." Love LINDA

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/22/2016 11:01:00 AM

Even without seeing the picture, I can still "see" this in my eyes--it's cool that you also employed alliteration here, Sneha!Thank you for passing by my write...

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/22/2016 2:38:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment; glad you like it!! :) :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/18/2016 4:01:00 PM

Good work..Way to go..Sara

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/22/2016 2:38:00 PM

Thanks a loT!! :) :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2016 1:53:00 PM

- A really great line, dear Sneha ..... lovely - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/22/2016 2:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Anne Lise!! :) :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 4/10/2016 1:39:00 PM

very mature creation Sneha. God bless.

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/22/2016 2:37:00 PM

Thank you!! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2016 9:57:00 PM

this is a beauty!! I bet she judges this contest soon.

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/10/2016 2:37:00 AM

Thank you so much for your support, dear Andrea!! :) :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2016 5:38:00 PM

how picturesque, sneva... finely arranged!..huggs

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/9/2016 5:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Nette!! So glad to see you again!! :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2016 4:42:00 AM

This is very beautiful and descriptive Sneha... You should put it in Broken Wings latest contest I think you would do well in it:-) You need to remove previous contest details and put the ones for BW:-) hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/4/2016 2:57:00 PM

Thanks a lot for your support and suggestion, dear Jan!! I have entered.. So glad you like it!! :) :)