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Light Thoughts

With pale yellow wings
         the butterfly passes by
          Flutters up and down
        A delicate sight to see
   As light thoughts, return to me



Heidi Sands

5/17/18

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2018

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May 24, 2018 at 11:41 PM

Your words are wonderfully lit, Heidi

May 25, 2018 at 7:13 AM

Thank you, Chance :)

May 18, 2018 at 8:52 AM

And light thought are so wonderful, Heidi as is your wonderful Tanka! Happy Friday xxoo

May 18, 2018 at 8:55 AM

Thank you Mike! Happy Friday :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 18, 2018 at 5:12 AM

Delightful image as it reminds me of the butterflies visiting my garden! Beautiful dear, Heidi!

May 18, 2018 at 7:13 AM

Thank you Demetrios :)

May 17, 2018 at 11:22 AM

Delicate and pleasant like the butterfly!

May 17, 2018 at 11:51 AM

Thank you Vijay :)

May 17, 2018 at 11:19 AM

love the last line... lovely imagery heidi... huggs

May 17, 2018 at 11:51 AM

Thank you Nette :)

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