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Light Thoughts

With pale yellow wings the butterfly passes by Flutters up and down A delicate sight to see As light thoughts, return to me Heidi Sands 5/17/18

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Date: 5/24/2018 11:41:00 PM
Your words are wonderfully lit, Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2018 7:13:00 AM
Thank you, Chance :)
Date: 5/18/2018 8:52:00 AM
And light thought are so wonderful, Heidi as is your wonderful Tanka! Happy Friday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Mike! Happy Friday :)
Date: 5/18/2018 5:12:00 AM
Delightful image as it reminds me of the butterflies visiting my garden! Beautiful dear, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios :)
Date: 5/17/2018 11:22:00 AM
Delicate and pleasant like the butterfly!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/17/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 5/17/2018 11:19:00 AM
love the last line... lovely imagery heidi... huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/17/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Nette :)

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