Light In My Dreams

"I shall be telling this with a sigh" Robert Frost, The Road Less Travelled. ~ I had a mother once With long dark hair Whose candle faded, but not her flame The light she left inside my heart Is still alive, forever glowing It flickers softly in the dark It chases shadows from my dreams And comforts me, and softly keeps me warm and safe, and whispers love that does not leave me It somehow knows when darkness swallows me that soon the blush of morning follows It tucks me in, and lightens my dread and with warm breath, will kiss my head Then tells me "Hush, hush little sweet one...., ...go back to sleep"
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ In honor of Constance's Contest: "Give Me a Kiss, Mommy" By Carrie Richards 10/6/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Any Mother Poem" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Warm memories. Great tribute to a great lady. Nice going. luv Ralph
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October 24, 2011 at 11:28 PM
I love this. Did she ever come to know white hair or did she die young, Carrie? Great ending on this one. Congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 8:54 PM
Congrats Carrie on a wonderful win with this tremendous write for the contest luv.. truly tender..
Johnson Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 5:58 PM
We're always our mothers' little ones. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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October 24, 2011 at 4:26 PM
Awesome write,Carrie.wonderful piece of work.Congrats on your win....
Golden Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 11:11 PM
Ahhh...precious memories! Love this tender little poem, Carrie. Sounds almost like a lullabye! Hugs, Donna
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November 21, 2009 at 4:40 AM
Lovely and very beautiful. Blessings of parents are the most precious wealth any one can have. You reminded me of my mother whom I lost long back. She always inspired me and still is the source of my inspirations. Thanks for a good reading. My best wishes for you, Ravindra
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November 13, 2009 at 11:20 AM
i love this poem and thanx for the comment on my heavenly mother poem
Strand Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 11:32 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian
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November 12, 2009 at 4:51 PM
I just posted tribute poem for u... I luv this poem as I commented on it yesterday... it makes me well up with emotions...thankxxx Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 12:37 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Carrie. Love, Carol
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November 12, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Although I have no children of my own. I have three sisters much younger than I, Two more older sister, that have children. Two older brothers that have children, and two more younger brothers.... Needless to say I have a large fam, and they always like to use me for their escape.... I am good with it though... I love my fam........:JP]
Strand Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 12:06 AM
The longlasting love of a mother Carrie.Well penned.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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November 11, 2009 at 10:33 PM
Beautiful words Carrie, great job on this remarkable piece...Raul
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November 11, 2009 at 10:03 PM
Very beautiful poem, Carrie. I still had a mother four and a half years ago. I miss her so much. I just had a dream and she visited me and made me sleep like a baby. My latest poem is about that tragic event four years ago. It's called "Roulette". Love, Iolanda
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November 11, 2009 at 7:39 PM
OH Carrie.. this hit home for me.. on Thanksgiving Day 17 years ago my MOM passed away and its still like yesterday and your poem touched me so deeply.. wonderful tribute to your Mom and all Moms everywhere who have passed on to a higher form of life... u may like to read my poems "Metamorphosis" "Empty Tomb" and "A Mother's Ways" or "In Memoriam" .. all tributes to my precious Mom... great composition .. luv it... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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November 11, 2009 at 3:45 PM
This is very nice Carrie...enjoyed very much...Marty
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November 11, 2009 at 2:34 PM
Beautifully written Carrie. A mothers love always lives within us even long after her tracks can no longer be seen. They're always felt. Hugs, Love Patty
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November 11, 2009 at 1:16 PM
Who is more precious than a mother,,nobody,,Mum is always Mun,so beautiful Carrie--Charma
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