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Written On 29th July 2026.

Light Flickering Candle

Shadows, dark silhouettes, flickering candle casts them, the ambience of a dark room, in a relaxed setting.
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Trifiatis Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 6:57 AM
Painting with the shadows shed by a flickering candle on the walls. An impressive artwork, dear Tom. Blessings.😊
Cunningham Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 7:06 AM
Thank you Demetrios, they certainly create a soothing atmosphere. 🕯Tom
Sands Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 8:22 AM
Very nice relaxing poem Tom. I love it :)❤️
Cunningham Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 9:47 PM
Thank you very much Heidi, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom🌹
Canerdy Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 1:12 PM
You have painted an appealing scene, Tom. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 1:26 PM
Thank you Janice there's something magical about a flickering candle Tom🌹
Proxenos Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 12:56 PM
Hi Tom, I think Poetry soup has almost forgotten me, I really appreciate you reading and commenting on MY LAST POEM. THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL WRITE, SO WELL WRITTEN, A CANDLE FLICKERING SO PERFECTLY DESCRIBED, REMINDING ME A LITTLE OF CLOUDS MOVING AND DRIFTING AND PRESENTING SO MANY IMAGES. BE WELL DEAR FRIEND, WE ARE ALL FINE - SENDING HUGS TO YOU AND ALL YOUR FAMILY. Jenny.
Cunningham Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 1:32 PM
Thank you very much Jennifer, as you've noticed they've brought in many changes, I'd have staggered them a bit to give folks time to get to grips with them. The new poems is now 50 and doesn't really give others a chance to see their work as the list changes in a few hours when its busy. Tom🌹
Jones Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 12:09 AM
A soothing poem love the ambiance of it! Have a wonderful week Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 12:38 AM
Thank you very Karen, you too. Tom🌹
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 3:23 PM
Sounds nice, said out loud, Tom! The relaxed setting is calming, whilst the first lines could be set in another direction.
Cunningham Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 9:03 PM
Thank you Kim, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Tom
One Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 10:46 AM
You create a vivid scene with only a few words... Nicely done Tom...
Cunningham Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:46 PM
Thank-you very much SO I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 3:29 AM
Wonderful imagery. A flickering candle. Might lull you to sleep/
Cunningham Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 3:31 AM
Thank you Victor, they really create a relaxed atmosphe🕯 Tom
Sharma  Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 6:15 AM
Oh my, this really presents a very soothing and relaxing atmosphere ~ one that soothes the soul and lulls the heart with the warmth of light, how beautifully done, dear Tom.. your words always have such an eloquent flow to them. Pleasure reading you always, you really do micros just as well as long poems ~ sending you light and best wishes always ✨🕊️🌙
Cunningham Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 6:49 AM
Thank you very much Hiya, candlelight creates a warm glow and is the perfect setting for a romantic dinner. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom🌹
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 4:41 AM
I really like this, Tom. Let's find an emoji for it. 🔥 Your poem is FIRE!
Cunningham Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 5:26 AM
Thank you Andrea, the emojis add a bit of sparkle to comments Tom🌹
Poet Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 4:19 AM
A wonderful fit between the words and the visual. Luminous shades are cast by candlelight in a dimly lit space. An exquisite poem, Tom.
Wolf Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 8:26 PM
It' 'My Friend, Flicka.' ... Couldn't resist that one.... Nicely penned, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 8:44 PM
Lol,thanks Gershon. Nothing like flicka to create a relaxed mood. Tom
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 3:41 PM
captivating imagery! Such a pleasant read. wishing you well.
Cunningham Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 8:45 PM
Thank you Sara, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Beaufort Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 3:21 PM
Hi Tom....I haven't written anything recently, but I just wanted to say hi!!! This poem not only portrays a relaxed setting, but it relaxes my mind. This work could help anyone stressed by guiding them through and session of self hypnosis! You have a real gift for reaching deep into our minds!! Glad you are ethical!! Hope you are well and sending smiles!!
Cunningham Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 8:49 PM
Thank you very much Duke, there's something magical and romantic about a flickering candle, very soothing to the mind. Not long back from holiday, enjoying the heatwave here in the UK. Hope you're keeping well too.👍 Tom
May Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 11:15 AM
You capture the image very nicely Tom, best wishes
Cunningham Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 1:19 PM
Thank you very much Joseph. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Empress Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 7:39 AM
So beautiful! Love the imagery, dear Tom! And I just love how whether it is a short verse or long poem, how your poems flow is stunning ~ just flawless! Best wishes! Pleasure reading ~ sending you light always
Cunningham Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 8:46 AM
Thank you IE, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 7:25 AM
Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Cunningham Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 8:07 AM
Thank you very much Sara, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 5:36 AM
Hello Tom :-) Interesting read! Have a nice day and a nice night too lol.
Cunningham Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 6:04 AM
Thank you very much Abdullah, im happy you enjoyed it. Hope your week is going well. Tom
George Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 5:19 AM
The image and the poem match perfect. In a dark room, candle light leaves flickering shadows. A beautiful verse. All the best dear Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 6:02 AM
Thank you Valsa, as a boy we used to get power cuts and I always remember the shadows flickering any time someone walked by. Tom
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 4:25 AM
Nicely written Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 4:38 AM
Thank you Alison. The form is called a pensee, it's a new one on me. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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