John Freeman Poet Free verse

Light Energy, Love Heartbeat

a triple pariku 
  
the two part nature of light
reveals waves and particles
of Spirit a body forms

     stabilized by precept, the Love heartbeat!

trinity’s derivatives 
lights of Love’s incentive
proof of faith’s infinity

    conscience's faith conceived self, light’s dimensions!

paranormal is divine
particle light dimensions
held in waves of suspensions

   waves, fluid light suspends light’s dimensions!  

   
For contest: Light Energy
In Honor of : Rick Parise

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Carol Sunshine Brown January 13, 2011 at 11:15 AM Congratulations on your win John in Rick's "Pariku Contest". Love, Carol

Kash Poet January 7, 2011 at 4:33 AM Congrats John on your well deserved win and thanks for your congratulatory message.

Audrey Haick January 6, 2011 at 9:01 PM Congratulations on your big win in the contest, John! Amazing lines within! Love, Audrey

Nette Onclaud January 6, 2011 at 8:51 PM best of cheers for a great win in the contest… just stunning! : )nette

Tahera Mannan January 6, 2011 at 7:59 PM Wow Moses.Many congratulations for this super success.

Sara Kendrick January 6, 2011 at 4:51 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards January 6, 2011 at 4:24 PM All three are simply beautiful, John !! Each one could stand on it's own!! Congratulations on your winning poem !!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 6, 2011 at 3:26 PM Congrats Moses on your wonderful win in Rick's contest with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy another great success with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta January 6, 2011 at 3:14 PM Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Rick, John

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2011 at 1:44 PM a very ambitious entry with three in one, Way to go, john and a big congrats to you! LUv, Andrea

Eamon Duffin December 27, 2010 at 5:13 AM Hi John. You really are a fantastic wordsmith. Beautifully crafted piece that lies easily on the ear. Best of luck in the contest. Eamon

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 21, 2010 at 8:54 AM wow-- you sure took Rick's challenge to a different level, Moses-- very interesting and I think this is gonna be a winner too :) -- nikko :)

Noel Villarosa December 21, 2010 at 3:10 AM Two sources of energy where one dwells, lighted love to keep heartbeat with full of energy, very interesting to read. Good luck to you on this contest, John. (^_^) Noel.

Carolyn Devonshire December 20, 2010 at 6:21 PM Magnificently expressed thoughts, John, and so true to your beliefs. Best one I've seen for Rick's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta December 20, 2010 at 3:50 PM Cute, creative and convincing thoughts on the light energy, Good luck, John

James Marshall Goff December 20, 2010 at 2:31 PM far-reaching thought, John!!! good work!!! and thanks for the congrats!!...jimbo

Daniel Cheeseman December 20, 2010 at 12:57 PM Divine write John loved the content

Maya Kaabour December 20, 2010 at 12:22 PM LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! John, I'm a fan... your friend in poetry, Maya *

Nette Onclaud December 20, 2010 at 11:51 AM how mystical, john... such a unique writte.. best of luck in the contest! :) nette