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Light Energy, Love Heartbeat

a triple pariku the two part nature of light reveals waves and particles of Spirit a body forms stabilized by precept, the Love heartbeat! trinity’s derivatives lights of Love’s incentive proof of faith’s infinity conscience's faith conceived self, light’s dimensions! paranormal is divine particle light dimensions held in waves of suspensions waves, fluid light suspends light’s dimensions! For contest: Light Energy In Honor of : Rick Parise

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2011 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win John in Rick's "Pariku Contest". Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 1/7/2011 4:33:00 AM

Congrats John on your well deserved win and thanks for your congratulatory message.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/6/2011 9:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win in the contest, John! Amazing lines within! Love, Audrey

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/6/2011 8:51:00 PM

best of cheers for a great win in the contest… just stunning! : )nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/6/2011 7:59:00 PM

Wow Moses.Many congratulations for this super success.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2011 4:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/6/2011 4:24:00 PM

All three are simply beautiful, John !! Each one could stand on it's own!! Congratulations on your winning poem !!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/6/2011 3:26:00 PM

Congrats Moses on your wonderful win in Rick's contest with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy another great success with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/6/2011 3:14:00 PM

Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Rick, John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2011 1:44:00 PM

a very ambitious entry with three in one, Way to go, john and a big congrats to you! LUv, Andrea

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/27/2010 5:13:00 AM

Hi John. You really are a fantastic wordsmith. Beautifully crafted piece that lies easily on the ear. Best of luck in the contest. Eamon

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/21/2010 8:54:00 AM

wow-- you sure took Rick's challenge to a different level, Moses-- very interesting and I think this is gonna be a winner too :) -- nikko :)

Noel Villarosa

Date: 12/21/2010 3:10:00 AM

Two sources of energy where one dwells, lighted love to keep heartbeat with full of energy, very interesting to read. Good luck to you on this contest, John. (^_^) Noel.