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Light Cotton Ball Clouds

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                                                       light cotton ball clouds
                                                      cotton candy rain laden..
                                                          sun cast magenta

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2012

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/7/2012 12:06:00 PM sweet enough to eat Sara are these lines of perfection Haiku luv.. flowing images tempt the mind so.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/3/2012 9:16:00 PM They will get very laden if like cotton balls. Good analogy, Sara. And yes, I would imagine those last two choka lines serve as a kind of summary. I really like that form. They are almost exactly like tanka but you can go forever and ever with them!! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 2/2/2012 1:38:00 PM Lovely images, my friend Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 2/2/2012 12:35:00 PM This just brings out such comfy images for me :) and thank you so much for understanding Sara :) it was a pleasure to read your entry and I'm happy you enjoyed writing for the contest and I love your attitude in life :D Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 2/2/2012 6:58:00 AM enjoyed the candy morning. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/2/2012 6:39:00 AM what a haiku treat from the style and form perspective, sara.. :) hugggs! Login to Reply

Anthony Nutter Date: 2/2/2012 6:28:00 AM Beatiful sunsets. Excellent write Login to Reply

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 2/1/2012 7:38:00 PM Pretty picture. Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 2/1/2012 7:19:00 PM lovely! simply lovely. soft and and soothing Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/1/2012 7:13:00 PM Love it Sara,,, God bless...;-)..pd Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 2/1/2012 5:51:00 PM Nice one Sara, hope you are doing well and good luck in your endeavors. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 2/1/2012 4:35:00 PM Sounds like a lovely sunset Sara; haven't seen the magenta word for a long time and it lends a certain feeling to you ku. :) Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 2/1/2012 3:02:00 PM What a great painting, Sara. Love it! daver Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/1/2012 1:17:00 PM Nicely Haiku Sara,like it. oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Lucinda Cayton Date: 2/1/2012 1:01:00 PM absolutely beautiful poetry. Lucinda, glad I stopped again. Login to Reply

Lizanne Scholtz Date: 2/1/2012 12:32:00 PM wonderful haiku Sara, love it. Elizabeth Login to Reply

Suzanne C. Goudreau Date: 2/1/2012 10:59:00 AM Wow, superbly creative and lovely imagery! Thank you for sharing! Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 2/1/2012 10:27:00 AM Smile ˜ I love cotten candy, my dear sweeet beautiful Sara * Pink, fluffy soft swirled ˜ Sooo very beautiful ˜ My love, Always, John!:) * Login to Reply

The Situation Date: 2/1/2012 9:37:00 AM 50s and 60s here Login to Reply