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Light Cotton Ball Clouds

. light cotton ball clouds cotton candy rain laden.. sun cast magenta

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 2/7/2012 12:06:00 PM
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sweet enough to eat Sara are these lines of perfection Haiku luv.. flowing images tempt the mind so..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/3/2012 9:16:00 PM
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They will get very laden if like cotton balls. Good analogy, Sara. And yes, I would imagine those last two choka lines serve as a kind of summary. I really like that form. They are almost exactly like tanka but you can go forever and ever with them!!
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Jack Horne
Date: 2/2/2012 1:38:00 PM
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Lovely images, my friend
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 2/2/2012 12:35:00 PM
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This just brings out such comfy images for me :) and thank you so much for understanding Sara :) it was a pleasure to read your entry and I'm happy you enjoyed writing for the contest and I love your attitude in life :D
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 2/2/2012 6:58:00 AM
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enjoyed the candy morning.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 2/2/2012 6:39:00 AM
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what a haiku treat from the style and form perspective, sara.. :) hugggs!
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Anthony Nutter
Date: 2/2/2012 6:28:00 AM
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Beatiful sunsets. Excellent write
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Vince Suzadail Jr.
Date: 2/1/2012 7:38:00 PM
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Pretty picture.
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M.I.A .
Date: 2/1/2012 7:19:00 PM
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lovely! simply lovely. soft and and soothing
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/1/2012 7:13:00 PM
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Love it Sara,,, God bless...;-)..pd
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John Freeman
Date: 2/1/2012 5:51:00 PM
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Nice one Sara, hope you are doing well and good luck in your endeavors. Agape, Moses
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Elizabeth Wesley
Date: 2/1/2012 4:35:00 PM
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Sounds like a lovely sunset Sara; haven't seen the magenta word for a long time and it lends a certain feeling to you ku. :)
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Daver Austin
Date: 2/1/2012 3:02:00 PM
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What a great painting, Sara. Love it! daver
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/1/2012 1:17:00 PM
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Nicely Haiku Sara,like it. oxox love Anne-Lise
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Lucinda Cayton
Date: 2/1/2012 1:01:00 PM
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absolutely beautiful poetry. Lucinda, glad I stopped again.
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Lizanne Scholtz
Date: 2/1/2012 12:32:00 PM
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wonderful haiku Sara, love it. Elizabeth
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Suzanne C. Goudreau
Date: 2/1/2012 10:59:00 AM
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Wow, superbly creative and lovely imagery! Thank you for sharing!
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John Rhinem
Date: 2/1/2012 10:27:00 AM
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Smile ˜ I love cotten candy, my dear sweeet beautiful Sara * Pink, fluffy soft swirled ˜ Sooo very beautiful ˜ My love, Always, John!:) *
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The Situation
Date: 2/1/2012 9:37:00 AM
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50s and 60s here
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