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December 15, 2024

Sanford-Style Tanka - A Picture Prompt Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Suzette Richards

FIRST PLACE

light bursts flaming on alabaster waves savours moment clutching rose umbrella shuts eyes in ecstasy

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/26/2024 10:58:00 AM

Beautiful tanka, Mala! It so reflects for me the bursting joy of this Christmas season! Merry Christmas, dear friend! Sending you "bursting" joy, hugs and blessings!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/27/2024 1:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dear Sam. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Sending you joy, love and many hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/15/2024 7:12:00 AM

- Lovely written, Mala :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/15/2024 7:24:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! You made me very happy. Looking forward to read yours.