Len Gasun Poet Shape

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March 1, 2025     9.27 am

Light Baggage

                                                  Light BaggagE
                                                  O                P
                                                  V                O
                                                  E                H
                                                  •	            *
                                                  P                *
                                                  E                E
                                                  A                A
                                                  C                S
                               Life’s baggagE  is  weightlEss, so handy
                               If packed with prayer, hope, positivity…..
                               God makes it light to carry effortlessly….
                               He gives convenience, a smooth journey.
                               Travel with Christ with faith and delight
                               Bring patience, kindness and joy in flight
                               Always take courage to do what’s right,
                               Give smiles, make each day clear, bright!  
                               Go in peace with someone…love, forgive,
                               A heavy heart heals, no loads to heave.
                               Ground wheeled gear will just roll away,
                               Empty-handed tour-like life night or day.
                                           f        t            r        l
                                             a  s                 o   l

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Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:03 PM Poetry Comes in All Kinds of Shape Contest Judged: 3/5/2025 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Vanya Evangeline Place 1 (1-10 single w & milti-HM w)

Paula Goldsmith March 6, 2025 at 8:29 AM Congratulations on your win. I love your fun/creative write. Hugs... Have a blessed day with your win................ Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:09 AM Oh, thank you so much for reading, your encouraging words and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Paula. God bless you always and your poetry. I'll visit your page later/soon ok. Hugs

thriveni c mysore March 6, 2025 at 6:32 AM I am back to congratulate you on your top win dear poet. Lovely cheers!!! Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:10 AM Oh, thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging words and warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend thriveni. I wasn't expecting this win. God bless you and your poetry. I'll visit your page later/soon ok. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2025 at 6:24 AM - Creative and great written, Len :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:12 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging words and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Annelise. God bless you always and your poetry. I'll visit your page very soon/later ok. Hugs

I Am Anaya March 5, 2025 at 3:37 PM Very nice, Len. This should be made into a card, soo good, the wheels are incredible. Congratulations on your top placement! ~Anaya Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 6:47 PM Oh, thank you so much my dear poet friend Anaya for the great idea. I'll do it as soon as I'm done with all our school requirements before the school year end. Again tyvvm. So much appreciated. Abundant Blessings to you. Hugs I Am Anaya March 8, 2025 at 9:34 AM Yes! I've learned so much using Microsoft tools for my graphics, and I think with a lil bit of proportion and color, your poem would be such a gift as a travel companion, and Jesus of course. :) Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:13 AM Thank you so much my dear poet friend Anaya for reading my poem, your encouraging words and warm congratulatory greetings. Do you think this can be made into a card? I'll try dear. God bless you always and your poetry. I'll visit you so soon/later ok. Hugs

Trina Layne March 5, 2025 at 1:57 PM Nice work, Len. Congratulations! Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:14 AM Thank you so much my dear poet friend Trina for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your poetry. I'll visit your page so soon/later ok. Hugs

Crystol Woods March 5, 2025 at 11:22 AM Very very creative and extra challenging with the acrostic! Congratulations! Xoxo Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:16 AM Thank you very much for reading my poem, your very encouraging words and warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend, Crystol. God bless you always and your poetry. I'll visit your page later/so soon ok. Hugs

Nette Onclaud March 5, 2025 at 9:48 AM ohhh wow., a visual and poetic delight which captures the theme in all its facets...what an amazing win so well deserving of top place, len! thank you for the inspiration...huge congrats and keep on shining, dear lady! Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:18 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging words and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend and sis Netter. I wasn't expecting this win. God bless you always and your poetry. I'll visit you later/so soon ok. Hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 5, 2025 at 5:15 AM Dear Len, so uplifting and beautifully crafted. Yes, with faith, love, and kindness, life’s burdens become light. The creativity in your form only adds to its brilliance. A true gem, just like you! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:21 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments my dear poet friend Daniel. You're a true gem here too my dearest friend. God bless you always and your poetry. I'll visit you so soon/later ok. Hugs

Vanya Evangeline March 5, 2025 at 1:33 AM This work of art is truly extraordinary, Len. You didn't just incorporate a Shape, but also Acrostic and Rhyme in the poem. I also love how the flow is light and adventurous, fitting with the theme & message. A well deserved 1st place! Congrats Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:22 AM Oh, thank you so much for acknowledging my work in your contest my dear poet friend Vanya. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. I'm so glad you like my entry so much. God bless you always and your poetry. I'll be there on your page so soon/later ok. Hugs

thriveni c mysore March 1, 2025 at 4:33 AM you got the shape, acrostic, message! all in one?! dear poet, and you did not forget to rhyme. I see so much effort in this unique work of art. kudos!! +FAV. Len Gasun March 8, 2025 at 9:25 AM Belated thank you for reading my poem and your encouraging words, also for faving it and again for your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend thriveni. Sorry for being late coz Im still recovering from flu and I was in complete bed rest. But I'll promise to visit your page later/so soon ok. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs