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Granite monoliths get raised to the dead, engraved markers, inked by light and shadow. And with the moon shining high overhead Juliet seeks to find her Romeo, amidst gravestones aligned in a row. Silence presides over the ghostly gloom, as she feels the names etched upon each stone. And tears flow as she searches for his tomb hidden by the weeds that have overgrown, for she's never felt so sad and alone. In the darkness, her fingers trace each name nature has worn down over many years. For it has been a while since she last came to consecrate his headstone with her tears, feeling overwhelmed by her grief and fears. An ebony shroud envelops the night, as she searches for a name, time forgot. And yet, aided by the moon's feeble light, she finally finds his neglected plot; and lays a bouquet of roses she'd brought. She'd chosen not to revisit his death, forcing herself to forget where he lay. And begs his forgiveness under her breath; for there are many things she's come to say, and kneeling by his grave, she starts to pray. Quintain (English) 12,30,2019

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Date: 1/19/2020 8:27:00 AM
Emile, you added to it, beautiful, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt, well done _Constance
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Date: 1/19/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/14/2020 2:21:00 PM
- A great winning poem, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/15/2020 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate that my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/11/2020 4:29:00 AM
This is gorgeous Emile! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! xxoo
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Date: 1/11/2020 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/10/2020 2:59:00 PM
wow, I can see why this won! awesome poem dear Emile, x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/10/2020 4:25:00 PM
Thanks luloo, I appreciate your awesome comment my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/10/2020 12:00:00 PM
Wonderful write Emile, glad to see this is in the winners circle!
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Date: 1/10/2020 4:23:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate that my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/5/2020 7:23:00 PM
Heartbreaking. You painted the scene well. I can relate, for I am that character in the scene.
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Date: 1/6/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Juliet, I appreciate your support, Happy Holidays my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/31/2019 9:09:00 AM
Amazing poetry, Emile. Best wishes in the contest. Wishing you a very Healthy and Happy New year!
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Date: 12/31/2019 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Charles, Happy Holidays my friend, Emile.

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