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Light Always Rises

ebon night dwindles

     cloaking mournfulness of heart—

a street lamp flickers




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Writing Challenge 5, May 2019, Senryu Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart   Posted 6/01/2019

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2019

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June 16, 2019 at 5:32 PM

So perfectly imaged, nette. That 'flickering street lamp' works so well in juxtaposition to the night. Wonderful senryu. :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos

June 11, 2019 at 1:15 PM

Nette congratulations my dear friend, hope you are well, as I miss seeing your new poems and always look out for them. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

June 10, 2019 at 3:38 PM

Lovely, Nette. Congrats to you.

Constance La France

June 10, 2019 at 10:58 AM

Nette congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write!

Connie Marcum Wong

June 10, 2019 at 2:23 AM

Congratulations on your poignant senryu winning first place! xxoo

June 3, 2019 at 8:02 AM

A poetic scene is worth a thousand words Great haiku, nette!

June 2, 2019 at 7:15 AM

so much imagery in such few words... great senryu...

William Kelii Kekaula

June 1, 2019 at 11:58 PM

A nice feel nette, best wishes, Aloha William

June 1, 2019 at 6:45 PM

nice thought

Frederic Parker

June 1, 2019 at 6:09 PM

Oh... I like this dear poet...

Connie Marcum Wong

June 1, 2019 at 6:06 PM

A brilliant Senryu Nette. This one should do really well! Beautiful! xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 1, 2019 at 4:40 PM

- Beautiful as always, best wishes in the contest Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 1, 2019 at 4:10 PM

We always seek the light in times of darkness. Hope you had a good trip. Tom. Good luck.

June 1, 2019 at 4:03 PM

Excellent write, Nette.

Caren Krutsinger

June 1, 2019 at 4:02 PM

Delicately and sweetly done, in a nette way, Nette. Nice.

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