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Light Always Rises

ebon night dwindles cloaking mournfulness of heart— a street lamp flickers ~ Writing Challenge 5, May 2019, Senryu Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart Posted 6/01/2019

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Date: 6/16/2019 5:32:00 PM
So perfectly imaged, nette. That 'flickering street lamp' works so well in juxtaposition to the night. Wonderful senryu. :) gw
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Date: 6/11/2019 1:15:00 PM
Nette congratulations my dear friend, hope you are well, as I miss seeing your new poems and always look out for them. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/10/2019 3:38:00 PM
Lovely, Nette. Congrats to you.
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Date: 6/10/2019 10:58:00 AM
Nette congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write!
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Date: 6/10/2019 2:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poignant senryu winning first place! xxoo
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Date: 6/3/2019 8:02:00 AM
A poetic scene is worth a thousand words Great haiku, nette!
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:15:00 AM
so much imagery in such few words... great senryu...
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Date: 6/1/2019 11:58:00 PM
A nice feel nette, best wishes, Aloha William
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Date: 6/1/2019 6:45:00 PM
nice thought
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Date: 6/1/2019 6:09:00 PM
Oh... I like this dear poet...
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Date: 6/1/2019 6:06:00 PM
A brilliant Senryu Nette. This one should do really well! Beautiful! xxoo
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Date: 6/1/2019 4:40:00 PM
- Beautiful as always, best wishes in the contest Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/1/2019 4:10:00 PM
We always seek the light in times of darkness. Hope you had a good trip. Tom. Good luck.
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Date: 6/1/2019 4:03:00 PM
Excellent write, Nette.
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Date: 6/1/2019 4:02:00 PM
Delicately and sweetly done, in a nette way, Nette. Nice.
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