Notes About The Poem

Written 25th July, 2026 

Initially for LIGHT A PENSEE Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud not entered.

LIGHT A PENSEE

Soft glow
a close presence
leans into the hush between
in a room that gathers too close
it knows the dark by heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 9:19 AM
ali, ohh dear...you missed entering this poetic gem? the language of intimacy is impressive that it's a winner in my heart!
Smith  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:29 PM
I am blaming old age. Thank you for your kind words 🌷🦋💋
Hayward Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 9:18 AM
Absolutely gorgeous. I'm feeling not so good today ad this lifted me up. Thank-you for that...
Smith  Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 3:21 PM
I hope your journey to getting better continues.❤️
Buhagiar Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 5:19 AM
Subtle imagery. I don't mind alking in the dark.😊
Smith  Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 5:49 AM
Thank you Victor 🐈‍⬛
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 11:39 PM
Wow. This is really good. I don't see it on the list which is sad because I think it's fantastic
Smith  Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 11:40 PM
Another poem I prepared then forgot the final part actually entering.😢
Phillips Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 10:50 AM
Hi Alison: You have nicely captured a subtle imagery here: “it knows the dark by heart”. Regarding my piece "Ima" It means "now" in Japanese language. Now is use consistently throughout the piece. I speak some Japanese. thanks for asking
Smith  Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 4:06 PM
Ima I thank you for visiting me.
Jones Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 6:03 PM
Wow! This makes an impression and was thought provoking! Good luck in the contest!
Smith  Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 6:38 PM
Thank you four your kind encouragement.
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 10:19 AM
- An excellent entry to the contest, Alison...good luck, a winner for sure :) - hugs
Smith  Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 2:15 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise
Hind Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 7:25 PM
wow, Alison! fav - you should do well in the contest
Smith  Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Paige - with contests I am happy to be an entrant.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 10:06 AM
What a wonderful write with a great picture. Love Both... "Good Luck" I did, "LIGHT FROM CANDLES." Have a lovely day/weekend writing away............
Smith  Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 3:23 PM
Your visits to my pages are appreciated.
Puddifoot Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 7:46 AM
five atmospheric lines, says a lot with few words..good entry for the contest
Smith  Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 3:21 PM
I tried. Thank you for your feedback.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 5:30 AM
So cool!
Smith  Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 3:21 PM
Thanks
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