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green branches swaying stop in the high yellow light move again like thieves 8/14/2022 PS syllable counter

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P.M. Richter

Date: 8/15/2023 10:57:00 AM

This is a beautiful haiku ~ congrats Matt

Matt Caliri
Date: 8/16/2023 9:40:00 PM

Thank you!!! I think I was sitting in a car waiting in a parking lot when I wrote this one. So romantic.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2022 1:32:00 PM

I enjoyed the read here, Matt. Congrats on your win

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/22/2022 7:55:00 AM

"Like thieves" = Great simile. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2022 5:22:00 AM

Matt, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!

Matt Caliri
Date: 8/22/2022 7:59:00 AM

Thanks, Tania! Flattered by the placement.