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green branches swaying stop in the high yellow light move again like thieves 8/14/2022 PS syllable counter

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Date: 8/15/2023 10:57:00 AM
This is a beautiful haiku ~ congrats Matt
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Matt Caliri
Date: 8/16/2023 9:40:00 PM
Thank you!!! I think I was sitting in a car waiting in a parking lot when I wrote this one. So romantic.
Date: 8/25/2022 1:32:00 PM
I enjoyed the read here, Matt. Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/22/2022 7:55:00 AM
"Like thieves" = Great simile. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/22/2022 5:22:00 AM
Matt, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!
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Matt Caliri
Date: 8/22/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thanks, Tania! Flattered by the placement.

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