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18th Oct 2023 (For SO's "How do you feel today 2 One liner" contest)

Light-Hearted


Lavender dreams light up my life, as lilac laughter liberates love...

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/28/2024 5:02:00 PM

Loved the pretty floral imagery in this and the peaceful feeling it gives the reader... Beautifully penned, Joanna :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/21/2023 2:03:00 PM

- Congratulations on your first place in the contest, Jo :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/20/2023 5:26:00 PM

Oh your monoku is just beautiful, Joanna! Lovely alliteration and emotion. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Pivotal Poetry

Date: 10/19/2023 11:26:00 PM

Poetically divine. Congrats on the win :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 12:35:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win with your lovely write. I enjoyed reading your "Light-Hearted" again. Have a blessed/great day writing away.....

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2023 11:38:00 AM

Lovely poem, light-hearted is one one word, almost... Congratulations on your placement.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 10/18/2023 7:02:00 PM

This is so beautiful. So happy to hear from you. I am fine. How are you?

Joanna Daniel
Date: 10/18/2023 10:19:00 PM

Hi Rama, I am doing fine by God's grace:) glad you took time to stop by:) hope you still write.. Long time since you posted anything

Joseph May

Date: 10/18/2023 5:52:00 PM

Wonderful Monoku Jo, best wishes

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/18/2023 2:59:00 PM

A lovely Monoku write. I love anything Lavender. Have a blessed day..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2023 12:40:00 PM

I love the two colors you chose AND the alliteration so I really love this one liner

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/18/2023 8:58:00 AM

Wonderful Monoku that deserves high placement in your contest. Not easy to write but you did very well. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/18/2023 6:35:00 AM

How beautiful is this monoku! I am in awe of your wordplay! So creative and soulful! I especially love “ lavender dreams light up my life” ah soul warming! And i must say your alliterations are flowing just seamlessly! “ lilac laughter” love ur use of colors! So fitting for the mood! Goodluck for the contest. Im sure it is a top winner

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/18/2023 5:19:00 AM

- A beautiful and lovely fragrant poem, Jo :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/18/2023 4:57:00 AM

Wow, this is such a beautiful monoku with gorgeously flowing alliteration throughout! I'm loving your use of colours here "lavender" and "lilac".. So profound and breathtaking.. You've described a very serene ambience here when one is in a light-hearted mood, living life to the fullest and dreams adorn their skies.. Filled with laughter and joy! Truly enjoyed reading this one dear Jo, you're a talented poetess really :)

Light-Hearted

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