Lifting the Fog

with closed misty eyes
trying to see the future,
fog bound memories
distort her vision, but soon,
love will set her free to heal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 11, 2014 at 7:54 PM
lovely win... luv~ SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 3:14 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
Roberts Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 2:31 AM
Thank you Sara your comments mean a lot to me ...Seren
May Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Very nice tanka ...congrats on your win
Roberts Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 5:46 PM
Thank you Joseph..... Seren
Jones Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 5:03 PM
Lovely write Seren ..congratulations
Roberts Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 2:38 AM
Thank you Donna....Seren
Lamoureux Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 11:01 AM
This is so hopeful, congratulations.
Roberts Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 2:38 AM
Hi Richard, many thanks ...Seren
Mehta Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 12:26 AM
Beautiful write on lifting the fog, Congrats, Seren
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 5:01 AM
Thank you for your kind words ...Seren
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Congrats for your win, Seren. I like the symbolic use of fog in this one.
Roberts Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 2:39 AM
Hi Andrea, your words are welcome, I thank you ....Seren
Sivey Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 7:15 AM
Wow, you have written a tremendous write my friend! I surely loved reading this awesome poem here this morning! It's nice to see you posting again Seren, I am enjoying reading your creative works! What a wondrous piece, Great Job!!
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 5:02 AM
Thank you so much Russell...Seren
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