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Lifting the Fog

with closed misty eyes trying to see the future, fog bound memories distort her vision, but soon, love will set her free to heal.

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Skat A

Date: 2/11/2014 7:54:00 PM

lovely win... luv~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2014 3:14:00 PM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/20/2014 2:31:00 AM

Thank you Sara your comments mean a lot to me ...Seren

Joseph May

Date: 1/12/2014 5:37:00 PM

Very nice tanka ...congrats on your win

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/18/2014 5:46:00 PM

Thank you Joseph..... Seren

Donna Jones

Date: 1/12/2014 5:03:00 PM

Lovely write Seren ..congratulations

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2014 2:38:00 AM

Thank you Donna....Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2014 11:01:00 AM

This is so hopeful, congratulations.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2014 2:38:00 AM

Hi Richard, many thanks ...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2014 12:26:00 AM

Beautiful write on lifting the fog, Congrats, Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/12/2014 5:01:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2014 9:43:00 PM

Congrats for your win, Seren. I like the symbolic use of fog in this one.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2014 2:39:00 AM

Hi Andrea, your words are welcome, I thank you ....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/5/2014 7:15:00 AM

Wow, you have written a tremendous write my friend! I surely loved reading this awesome poem here this morning! It's nice to see you posting again Seren, I am enjoying reading your creative works! What a wondrous piece, Great Job!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/12/2014 5:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Russell...Seren