Lifting the Fog

Damp, misty low clouds Swirling, entwining every tree Quietness prevades In the sky an opening Light pierces lifting the fog
Inspired by Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 5, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Wonderful writing, great visuals. Love it.. very well done, best wishes. Pete.
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December 23, 2013 at 2:41 PM
And the light shines indeed Sara, just looking you up, before i leave in the early morning..'
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December 23, 2013 at 12:51 PM
Fine poem Sara, describing scenes witnessed by many as nature shows her craft, James :)
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December 23, 2013 at 6:21 AM
I like this poem. I do enjoy watching the fog at times. It can be so very mysterious. You painted a very beautiful picture here. Thanks for posting. Jancarl
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December 23, 2013 at 12:25 AM
Wonderful picture you have created of the fog lifting, sara
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December 22, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Wonderful write Sara...I enjoyed this very much. Merry Christmas Jon
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December 22, 2013 at 5:45 PM
This is a brilliant write my friend! I am surely impressed by your descriptions of the fog and what it does both before and after the sun! I love the peacefulness that this poem expresses throughout it! What a beautiful piece Sara, Awesome Work!!
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