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Difficult it becomes, the secret of the judgement and metamorphosis of the painted cotton into a stained truth. To save the present tense. A dangerous crowd of vowels to express the incomplete moment of watery teeth, so hung, while misspeaking painfully in dyslexic manneo. I would not understand the hour-glass proxy. An undersized leash to walk with a giant: the magnitude of tragedy overwhelms the path ! SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/22/2011 7:58:00 AM
good morning, Satish, once more, your work is an example of why I continue at the soup....unreal good art!...this poem, which leaps like "Neruda" has sent my imagination to a thousand places in four-stanza's.....but most of all, time absolutely stood-still....as I immersed in such wonder! & your last stanza.....whooooshhhh!!!! to my faves!!! jimbo
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:25:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Satish. It was a pleasure to read your amazing poetry today and I hope you will continue to write always. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol
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