Carol Mitra Poet Tetractys

Life's Storms

We all long for the slowing of the storm
Swirling murky
Dark misty
Painful
Thoughts
Now
Moving
Like rain clouds
Bursting above
Delicately shifting our emotions.

06.10.2020
Double Tetractys

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Unseeking Seeker October 16, 2020 at 8:05 PM Beautiful! Congrats on your win! :) Carol Mitra October 16, 2020 at 8:20 PM Thank you....much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2020 at 7:27 PM this is really good writing here. congrats, Carol Carol Mitra October 16, 2020 at 8:19 PM Thanks Andrea....much appreciated.

Susan Ashley October 16, 2020 at 6:58 PM Oh, wonderful imagery.. dark to light emotions expressed so beautifully, Carol. Congratulations for your fine win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan Carol Mitra October 16, 2020 at 8:19 PM Thanks Susan....much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2020 at 8:42 AM - Congratulations on a great 3rd place in the contest, Carol :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Carol Mitra October 16, 2020 at 5:47 PM Thanks Anne-Lise...same here enjoy your weekend too...Hugs :)

Linda Alice Fowler October 15, 2020 at 7:35 PM Nice one Carol. Congratulations on the win! Linda Carol Mitra October 15, 2020 at 7:38 PM Thank you Linda.....much appreciated.

Eve Roper October 15, 2020 at 6:54 PM Congratulations on your win, Carol. Thank you for participating in my Tetractys contest. Hugs Eve Carol Mitra October 15, 2020 at 7:06 PM Thanks dear Eve....much appreciated.