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Life's Puzzle

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" John Ruskin, 1853
Like pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, closed up tight within a box. My memories lay scattered. Some are even lost. Mixed in with those memories, are events that shaped my world. Tangled, twisted, interwoven. Like so many cheap strands of pearls. Reach right in and pull out "Roller Skates", one that might have a smooth edge. But stuck to it might be "courage", as I faced report card day with dread. Grab up the piece that shows "kiss". The first one with my boyfriend. Underneath is disappointment, as he chose another girl, by days end. Dig around an you'll find "Trust". lying beneath "Corporate Bile". It seems to be stuck into, the notch of "Legal Files". There, in the bottom layer, sits "goals", though now quite ragged. From having been bumped, rubbed raw, it's borders are now jagged. Somehow "Life's Lessons", though quite large, Tends to, at times, elude my grip. It shuffles down between the layers, affording me a glimpse of its tip. Each mismatched piece represents, a moment, I've put away. There within the puzzle box, to be recalled another day.
Paula Swanson 6/20/2011 For the contest: All The Little Pieces Sponsored by Constance La France Placement: 2nd

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Date: 6/27/2011 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 10:15:00 AM
Many congrats on both your wins, Paula : )
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:36:00 PM
a soaring, stunning piece, paula...boquets for you on your real high win! :) huggs!
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:17:00 PM
Paula, I really love the way you tackled this contest, and how you put your fragments into labeled boxes. IT made for a very interesting read. one of my favorites in the contest. Congrats!
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:01:00 PM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Paula
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Date: 6/24/2011 5:51:00 PM
Many congrats on your well deserved win, Paula. Wonderful heart felt writing. Lainie
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:44:00 PM
Excellent entry and win my dear... luv Michael
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:07:00 PM
Congrats Paula on another amazing win for excellent poetry in Constance's contest .. extremely beautiful and full of energy ..my friend..luv ..
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Date: 6/21/2011 2:31:00 PM
Wow, good poetry piece here. I know you'll do well in Constance's contest. The very best of luck with this polished piece, Paula. Hugs, Licia.
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Date: 6/21/2011 10:54:00 AM
very interesting!
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