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Life's Mysteries

Love needs to rule the world but it doesn't I dreamt of my enemies drawing near Focus on past shades knowing I shouldn't Exhausted from all roads that remain unclear Silence is deafening inside my head Music will soothe the pain and make me strong Youth now rules where wisdom should in it's stead Status is found in a commercial song Twisting, turning our world goes round the sun Existing in this truth that we all share Reveal the answer to this conundrum If this world is mine? What sin shall you bare? Each of us must stand as sister's and brother Sacred is all life equal to each other

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Steve Crismond

Date: 12/31/2020 8:07:00 AM

Hello, this is a great poem. You referenced music alot. Do you play an insrtument? Hiss, Boom, pow, I see your favorite literary vehicle is onomatopoeia. I have a question, am I a grandfather?

Heather Crismond
Date: 12/31/2020 10:14:00 AM

No I don't, my daughter Rain plays anything with strings. Music is life it''s everywhere. Unfortunately, not enough people slow down enough to hear it. You also have a grandson Frank, but everyone calls him Toncsi pronounced Tôn/che. Its hungarian. Their father is from there, he received the nickname when we visited as a baby.