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Life's Missing Piece

Life's Missing Piece Living life alone awhile can really be quite freeing But there seems something of this life that's missing in my being Oh, I am not completely alone love comes from a few directions But for that one true love in life my soul still longs and beckons Will this now always be my fate my soul forever lonely While friends and loved ones fill some space I still crave my one and only.

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/20/2017 12:50:00 PM

This is excellent, precised and highly intellectual. A huge 7 for me.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/20/2017 2:56:00 PM

Thank You Funom, you are very kind :)

Chris Green

Date: 5/18/2017 11:19:00 AM

Ok, no bright sun and blue skies in this sad poem but, it is written so wonderfully that a little sun is peeking through. :) This was fantastic Lenna, you have expressed this feeling perfectly, the loneliness is felt. Makes me want to send you a hug, so I will ((Hug))

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/18/2017 11:38:00 AM

Thank You Chris, I am glad you liked this. Life is not always sunny, but we find ways to cope ......... hugs DO help when one is sad or lonely. I thank you for that :) hug returned {{hug}}

Tim Smith

Date: 5/18/2017 11:01:00 AM

It is hard when they are not there anymore... lovely poem

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/18/2017 11:40:00 AM

Yes Tim, many of us know the feeling and it IS hard. Thank You and I hope for many sunny happy days ahead for you :)