Lifes Growing Joy Poem Within a Poem

*** Life’s Growing Joy Poem Within a Poem ***

My 70’s may be the decade
For reaching my pathway’s
Ends and Epiphanies: a service of ‘Lessons and Pains’

    — To help my growing….

For example, Truths that I heard repeatedly,
I now believe well enough to take
My spirit from Dreams to Actuality — metaphorically then —

    — I lean into the sky as a noteworthy Gnarly Tree…

Also a lesson such as,  ‘God lives within us,’ although 
It’s hard for me to understand why Our Holy God opts
To be threading through these rickety,

       — These creaking and oddly angling limbs….

Plus, like so many of the eternal, quite externally-wrought necesities 
Are thought to bring to us every happiness: from wealth or friends;
Or, all the sweet, easy hours of comfort soaking in starlight and sun,

    — Ignoring the wildly waving grass underneath…

The knowing of happines raises its cherished supports not from beyond,
But from within hearts treasuring freedom and wonder, 
Focussed on what is Other — in those moments when ego’s set aside —

    — While divinely coaxed roots of Joy, grow deeper, longer 
Through time, betwixt Heaven and Earth to blessedly radiate and thrive…


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(c) 6/22/2023 sally young eslinger
Thanks be to God— 

  * (In the Episcopal Church, just before Christmas, there
is a service called “Lessons and Carols,” telling the story of the birth of Christ.
** Please note! This could be considered an “Experimental” Poem, because, in a 2nd read, following the dashes, there IS to be found a poem-within-a-poem.  Hope you enjoyed them both!  Hugs & blessings,  
sally
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Baker Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 3:39 PM
Very creative, Sally. Well written, both of them. Write On! my friend. I enjoy following your poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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June 25, 2023 at 7:15 AM
Sally, your poem is truly magnificent! It evokes emotions of joy and growth as if one is reaching toward the sky. The imagery of the waving grass is particularly fascinating. Both aspects of the poem are equally enjoyable.
Proxenos Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Hi Sally clever to have a poem within a poem like a special message - I really enjoyed your write and will definitely follow you. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Eslinger Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:38 AM
Hi, Jennifer! Love your work. Honored you’ll be following. Thank you. So glad you enjoyed this one! xox sally
Buhagiar Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:27 PM
Thanks be to God indeed, Sally. Without Him we are nothing.
Eslinger Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Amen! Thanks for reading and commenting! God bless you!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 12:19 PM
A wonderful write. Yes, I really enjoyed your write. Have a blessed day...................
Eslinger Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Paula, so glad to see you and that you enjoyed this poem!Your comment is very appreciated! All my thanks. sally
Eslinger Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Paula, so glad to see you and that you enjoyed this poem!Your comment is very appreciated! All my thanks. sally
Theraven Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 8:37 PM
Sally, I felt feelings of joy and growth, leaning into the sky. Interesting that the grass was always there, waving. I liked them both. -Richard
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June 23, 2023 at 5:08 AM
So very glad you did, brother, Raven Richard! Many thanks for your time & consideration to write a comment! Your pal, a most sincerely serene Sal 0:-) A splendid day to you!
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