Life's End

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As the soapsuds disappear from the water My short life will end like a jotter He'll call me home Because I am surely His daughter Inspired after reading a Rubai written by Gershon Wolf jotter-n-a small notebook for jotting things down

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2023 11:25:00 AM

wow, Love this, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/5/2023 1:29:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 12/31/2022 7:33:00 PM

An indisputable truth concisely and beautifully put. Like soap bubbles that burst, our life too shall disappear one day and we will be called back to join Him!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/1/2023 1:49:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa. I can tell you are a person of faith. Thanks for the visit and taking time to comment on my work. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/27/2022 8:34:00 PM

Very nice…how wonderful to be a child of God!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/28/2022 3:05:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Without Him I would be nothing. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/27/2022 8:55:00 AM

A wonderful write. A story told in a few words. Have a blessed day.............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/27/2022 9:11:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. SK