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Life's End

As the soapsuds disappear from the water My short life will end like a jotter He'll call me home Because I am surely His daughter
Inspired after reading a Rubai written by Gershon Wolf jotter-n-a small notebook for jotting things down
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Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 11:25 AM
wow, Love this, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara
George Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 7:33 PM
An indisputable truth concisely and beautifully put. Like soap bubbles that burst, our life too shall disappear one day and we will be called back to join Him!
Kendrick Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 1:49 PM
Thank you, Valsa. I can tell you are a person of faith. Thanks for the visit and taking time to comment on my work. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 8:34 PM
Very nice…how wonderful to be a child of God!
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 3:05 AM
Thank you, Kim. Without Him I would be nothing. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 8:55 AM
A wonderful write. A story told in a few words. Have a blessed day.............
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Thank you, Paula. SK
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