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Life's Each Moment

Winter dies; green spring arrives with the start of something great.

Like parents with newborns, we can be in a euphoric state!

For summer’s brief fling with fun and sun, some can hardly wait!

Then fall recalls life's each sweet moment with foretaste of our fate.


April 14, 2017 for the Broken Wing's Form M- Monorhyme Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier Date: 4/15/2018 5:41:00 PM Well written monorhyme, Andrea. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/22/2017 7:03:00 PM Nicely written , Andrea, congratulations on your win. ~* Login to Reply

Miraj Raha Date: 4/21/2017 11:55:00 AM What a lovely way to describe our life with the passing of seasons.Wonderfully executed Andrea. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 4/20/2017 2:31:00 PM Andrea congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Monorhyme and I love your images too Login to Reply

Roy Pett Date: 4/20/2017 2:38:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea, wonderful monorhyme, a joy to read. :)) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 4/19/2017 4:26:00 PM A short tribute to all four seasons...a proper monorhyme which has deservedly gained a podium finish. Congratulations. // paul Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 4/19/2017 11:04:00 AM Well done Andrea and congratulations... Login to Reply

Sushma A. Singh Date: 4/19/2017 10:25:00 AM Tastes of the seasons! Lovely! Congrats, Andrea! Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 4/19/2017 8:07:00 AM A lovely write Andrea, the last line leaves me feeling my age. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 4/19/2017 8:05:00 AM WoW! Andrea, You did great with this well written write. You covered the four seasons very well. Your imagery and content were spot on. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Login to Reply

Akkina Downing Date: 4/18/2017 6:49:00 PM Now this is a fabulous ride thru four seasons. I love it :) Login to Reply

Elle Kilma Date: 4/18/2017 6:05:00 AM You took me on a ride through all the seasons. Great work! Login to Reply

John Michaels Date: 4/17/2017 5:22:00 AM Lovely imagery, Andrea. Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John. Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 4/15/2017 11:24:00 AM An impeccable write dear poet. A Fav. Login to Reply

Shubham Kamble Date: 4/15/2017 2:45:00 AM Lovely write, Andrea! Good luck for the contest ! :) shubham Login to Reply

Weston Gregory Date: 4/14/2017 9:39:00 PM Wow...great write andrea. Login to Reply

Steve Tomlin Date: 4/14/2017 9:17:00 PM Light and easy reading describing our seasons. Login to Reply

Lynn Marie Date: 4/14/2017 8:13:00 PM Beautiful. Each season gives us wondrous insights as one fades and another begins anew. Their memories, treasures unique to each of us, we carry in our hearts for life. Your respect for nature is inspiring through your tranquil words Andrea:) The last line is awesome. lynnxxx so honoured to be the first visitor. ...enjoy a beautiful Easter weekend with much Joy:) Login to Reply