Life's Ambition

Upon inspection of his life's ambition, he was troubled by a predilection,
Of having traveled on the right road, but in the wrong direction.




2/10/22
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Kauffman Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 10:38 AM
Can you see the smile on my face Kenneth? What a predicament! I guess there is a chance of accidentally crashing into life head-on! Congrats and high fives to you!
Peck Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 4:16 PM
HaHa--that IS a predilection! Great poem!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 8:21 PM
This made me smile Kenneth. Congratulations on your wonderful sixth place win. Blessings xxoo
Leiser Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 7:58 PM
Love the humor in your witty couplet, Kenneth! Congrats on your win! :)
Canerdy Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 7:25 PM
Very creative. CONGRATS on your win, Kenneth. Janice
Hankins Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 6:13 PM
Kenneth, congratulations on your placement out of 50 entries submitted. This couplet really caught my attention, especially the ending. Nice writing!
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February 22, 2022 at 5:46 PM
I like this, Kenneth. A bit amusing, a bit philosophical, a bit sad, a bit spiritual. A super all-around piece with much to ponder. Congratulations!
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