Premiere Contest WinnerLifelong, Meaningless Musings

Full title: LIFELONG, MEANINGLESS MUSINGS MEAN EVERYTHING OF NO VALUE aka OFF THE WALL RAMBLINGS After upscale meals, I know no relief until I somehow pick my un-fancy teeth. Serve me good food in my own home and these same teeth leave me alone. At work, when I am approached by someone who wishes to run some questions by me, I silently laugh at an image most fun – question marks toting briefcases as they run. When my hands are dish-washing sudsy or toting a large box for some distance, an air fairy enjoys itching my nose nutsy until I concede and scratch it roughly. Any new clothes I hang up that are white, closet creatures beat with yellow chains and their marks will not wash out of sight. The more I love it, the more yellow remains. Things do grow legs and then walk away. I tend to nest surrounded by my stuff. I will not move, but my stuff will parade, decay, migrate, and evade me, sure enough. There exist an invisible, rude agitator who throws dirt inside my refrigerator. Every week or so, this frig mini-meanie does put grime, spots, ice-hard raised trails and odd soot. My air fairy, closet creatures and frig mini-meanie were all to me, assigned. I know this because I often move and still, it is where I go that they find.
... CayCay Jennings November 24, 2016
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Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 12:14 PM
Now here is one with a trophy that I had loved in the past, and still do. My suggestion to you: Look over your trophy wins and poems that got most faves. You and I may have a 50/50 chance with those.
Vinson Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 10:48 AM
7 <~~~ without a doubt. Great idea, CayCay, great poem. : )
Nusker Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Very inventive take on the theme. Fabulous poem. Congrats on your trophy win.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 8:54 PM
Great ramble with crazy words to boot! Congrats, CayCay!
Richards Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 4:38 PM
What a delightful and honest portrayal of my own musings....as if you have read my mind ! Congratulations, CayCay !!
Green Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations on your win...I am so happy for you!!!
White Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 12:37 PM
WoW CayCay, you won! Congratulations :)
Zink Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 12:32 PM
1st place in my contest! Congratulations! Thank you for your entry!
Breedt Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Hi Cay Cay. Superb language skills again . Its fascinating how the ordinary things that we all do are so well described..
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 7:49 PM
yes, and I had a feeling I had seen this one before too, my dear friend. Please will you let me know when you do others that are this close to your heart!! Have a beautiful evening. I can't answer many comments because JOe is probably on his way home now and will want dinner!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 3:45 PM
wow, I had no idea what Ironic Zink was asking of us but I LOVE how you did this topic, my friend. I am gonna fave THIS one. And hey, I read a few of your emails quickly. I hope i saved them all becuase I know there were a few poems you especially wanted me to see, but i just can't think of their titles right now. remind me , will you? I will get around to your emails in a day or two. Can't wait!!!
Flats Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 7:47 PM
:-):-):-) I rate this high humor and award a gaggle of gold stars for grand gigglebilitiy!
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 1:48 PM
your imagery had me laughing out loud - think these creatures live in all of our lives CayCay lol:-) The contest is beyond my imagination you have done a fabulous job:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Very creative and fun to read and relatable in so many ways. This is what I call a mirror poem because as I read, I see myself in the words. Really cute CayCay and I love the names you have given to these little annoying creatures that in the end are you? :)
Gupta Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 5:27 AM
very witty ... imaginative ... humorous ...lovely ...
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 3:07 AM
This was too close for comfor. Makes want to get up right now and go clean out my fridge. Lol. You are so talented my friend. I hope you and your family had a lovely Thanksgiving! 7 ; )
White Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 11:27 PM
This made me smile wide, I loved it so much :D Especially this: "My air fairy, closet creatures and frig mini-meanie were all to me, assigned." Just wonderful. Good luck in the contest!
Vaso Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 10:34 PM
We must be neighbors cause those wee little friends seem to come over and visit me too!!!! Loved this, so witty, creative, cute and funny!
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