Life Without Soup

(11/02/2012)

Just like having a pen without a paper
Poetic thoughts without Soup,
Makes our words blocked in hunger

Just like having warm arms without any hug
Imaginative ideas without Soup,
Leads our creativities to be tugged 

Inspired by David William contest
Life without Soup

11th place in the contest :D

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/11/2013 9:37:00 AM
I'm new here, but I can still see why people can easily get hooked on this site. For quite a long time my work has just gathered dust in a closet, for no one but me to see. But it's so much more rewarding to share and make people feel something when they've read something that you've written. I enjoy reading your work, Dinda... food for thought most of the time :)
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Date: 2/25/2012 3:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win! love your 3rd line :)
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Date: 2/25/2012 9:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Dinda! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/24/2012 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dinda, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/24/2012 4:04:00 AM
Well done many congrats on your win xx
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Date: 2/23/2012 11:03:00 PM
congrats Dinda on a great win for true words about our special site for poetry and friendship too..luv..
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Date: 2/23/2012 9:43:00 PM
yours was an imaginative dandy, DINDA. BIG congrats for your win.
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Date: 2/23/2012 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/23/2012 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in David Williams' "Life Without Soup" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 1:18:00 PM
Dinda congratulations on your win,thanks for supporting my contest..David
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:58:00 PM
wow, so nice, especially the line about warm arms with no hugs.
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Date: 2/12/2012 5:16:00 AM
yes, pen without paper. this is my legacy. where else are they going to find The Situation. The Situation is exclusivly on the Soup.
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Date: 2/11/2012 11:04:00 AM
Very good use of metaphors to describe the life without soup.Best wishes.Where is your old Avatar?
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