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Life Without Soup

(11/02/2012)

Just like having a pen without a paper
Poetic thoughts without Soup,
Makes our words blocked in hunger

Just like having warm arms without any hug
Imaginative ideas without Soup,
Leads our creativities to be tugged 

Inspired by David William contest
Life without Soup

11th place in the contest :D

Copyright © Dinda Minardi | Year Posted 2012

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March 11, 2013 at 9:37 AM

I'm new here, but I can still see why people can easily get hooked on this site. For quite a long time my work has just gathered dust in a closet, for no one but me to see. But it's so much more rewarding to share and make people feel something when they've read something that you've written. I enjoy reading your work, Dinda... food for thought most of the time :)

Black Eyed Susan

February 25, 2012 at 3:34 PM

Congrats on your win! love your 3rd line :)

February 25, 2012 at 9:55 AM

Congrats on your win, Dinda! Love, Kim

Lizanne Scholtz

February 24, 2012 at 4:21 PM

Congratulations on your win Dinda, love Elizabeth

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 24, 2012 at 4:04 AM

Well done many congrats on your win xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 23, 2012 at 11:03 PM

congrats Dinda on a great win for true words about our special site for poetry and friendship too..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2012 at 9:43 PM

yours was an imaginative dandy, DINDA. BIG congrats for your win.

February 23, 2012 at 7:08 PM

Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 23, 2012 at 1:21 PM

Congratulations on the win in David Williams' "Life Without Soup" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

February 23, 2012 at 1:18 PM

Dinda congratulations on your win,thanks for supporting my contest..David

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2012 at 4:58 PM

wow, so nice, especially the line about warm arms with no hugs.

February 12, 2012 at 5:16 AM

yes, pen without paper. this is my legacy. where else are they going to find The Situation. The Situation is exclusivly on the Soup.

February 11, 2012 at 11:04 AM

Very good use of metaphors to describe the life without soup.Best wishes.Where is your old Avatar?

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