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Life With a Toddler

My sweet little angel, playing outside in the mud But wait it hasn't rained... how can there be... oh crud. 11/24/2021 YOUR FUNNIEST COUPLET EVER Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2021 4:22:00 PM

absolutely hilariarse, many congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx

Avery Won
Date: 12/15/2021 5:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan :D

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 12/8/2021 1:36:00 PM

Very humorous! Congratulations on your win! Blessings, Paulette

Avery Won
Date: 12/9/2021 4:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paulette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2021 3:07:00 PM

Hilarious!! Congrats.

Avery Won
Date: 12/8/2021 7:33:00 AM

Thank you Andrea!!

Greg Gaul

Date: 12/7/2021 10:38:00 AM

Ugh. Congrats.

Avery Won
Date: 12/8/2021 7:32:00 AM

Ugh indeed =P

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/6/2021 10:18:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me chuckle as I remember our toddlers... God bless you.

Avery Won
Date: 12/7/2021 4:34:00 AM

Thank you :)

Ann Peck

Date: 12/6/2021 9:14:00 AM

HaHa ~ I remember those days well! Congratulations on first place!

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 9:34:00 AM

Thank you Ann :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/6/2021 8:51:00 AM

Avery Won indeed WON. Well-deserved--so funny! Janice

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 9:33:00 AM

What's in a name? ;) Thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/6/2021 8:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun/cute write. Thanks for the laugh. I needed that. Have a blessed day/week...................

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 8:47:00 AM

Always happy to make someone smile :) Thank you!

Terry Flood

Date: 12/6/2021 12:36:00 AM

Brilliant. A well deserved win, Avery. Terry

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 4:54:00 AM

You're too kind :) Thank you!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/5/2021 11:42:00 PM

Truly funny. Congratulations!

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 4:54:00 AM

Thank you so much!

John Watt

Date: 12/5/2021 8:48:00 PM

This is laugh out loud funny Avery! I still remember the day my wife found our little angel teaching himself to fingerpaint... wait, who gave him fingerpaints... oh, crud. Congrats on top spot for this little brown gem.

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 4:53:00 AM

Thank you! Gotta appreciate those 'I hope that's chocolate' moments :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/5/2021 6:47:00 PM

"Oh crud" indeed! Congratulations on your trophy win Avery!

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 4:53:00 AM

Thank you, Sam!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/5/2021 6:37:00 PM

This is brilliant, Avery, congratulations:)

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 4:52:00 AM

Thank you so much :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/5/2021 6:34:00 PM

Oh, Avery, this is completely hilarious! I thought my sweet little angels were playing with mud one day too.. lol.. although I wasn't lol'ing then! Congratulations on your excellent trophy win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 4:52:00 AM

Some things are funnier in hindsight :-D Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/5/2021 5:15:00 PM

LOL! Congratulations on first place!

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 4:52:00 AM

Thank you Kim!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/5/2021 5:06:00 PM

My heartiest congratulations, Avery, on your top win in my humorous couplet contest. I laughed out loud every time I read this one. Good job!

Avery Won
Date: 12/6/2021 4:51:00 AM

Yay! Thank you so much! When you have two kids under 5, you have to have a sense of humor to survive :)