Avery Won Poet Couplet

Life With a Toddler

My sweet little angel, playing outside in the mud
But wait it hasn't rained... how can there be... oh crud.


11/24/2021
YOUR FUNNIEST COUPLET EVER Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Jan Allison December 14, 2021 at 4:22 PM absolutely hilariarse, many congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx Avery Won December 15, 2021 at 5:06 AM Thank you so much Jan :D

Paulette Calasibetta December 8, 2021 at 1:36 PM Very humorous! Congratulations on your win! Blessings, Paulette Avery Won December 9, 2021 at 4:34 AM Thank you so much, Paulette

Andrea Dietrich December 7, 2021 at 3:07 PM Hilarious!! Congrats. Avery Won December 8, 2021 at 7:33 AM Thank you Andrea!!

Greg Gaul December 7, 2021 at 10:38 AM Ugh. Congrats. Avery Won December 8, 2021 at 7:32 AM Ugh indeed =P

Beata Agustin December 6, 2021 at 10:18 PM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me chuckle as I remember our toddlers... God bless you. Avery Won December 7, 2021 at 4:34 AM Thank you :)

Ann Peck December 6, 2021 at 9:14 AM HaHa ~ I remember those days well! Congratulations on first place! Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 9:34 AM Thank you Ann :)

Janice Canerdy December 6, 2021 at 8:51 AM Avery Won indeed WON. Well-deserved--so funny! Janice Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 9:33 AM What's in a name? ;) Thank you!

Paula Goldsmith December 6, 2021 at 8:20 AM Congratulations on your win. What a fun/cute write. Thanks for the laugh. I needed that. Have a blessed day/week................... Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 8:47 AM Always happy to make someone smile :) Thank you!

Terry Flood December 6, 2021 at 12:36 AM Brilliant. A well deserved win, Avery. Terry Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 4:54 AM You're too kind :) Thank you!

Christuraj Alex December 5, 2021 at 11:42 PM Truly funny. Congratulations! Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 4:54 AM Thank you so much!

John Watt December 5, 2021 at 8:48 PM This is laugh out loud funny Avery! I still remember the day my wife found our little angel teaching himself to fingerpaint... wait, who gave him fingerpaints... oh, crud. Congrats on top spot for this little brown gem. Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 4:53 AM Thank you! Gotta appreciate those 'I hope that's chocolate' moments :)

Sam Kauffman December 5, 2021 at 6:47 PM "Oh crud" indeed! Congratulations on your trophy win Avery! Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 4:53 AM Thank you, Sam!

Joanna Daniel December 5, 2021 at 6:37 PM This is brilliant, Avery, congratulations:) Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 4:52 AM Thank you so much :)

Susan Ashley December 5, 2021 at 6:34 PM Oh, Avery, this is completely hilarious! I thought my sweet little angels were playing with mud one day too.. lol.. although I wasn't lol'ing then! Congratulations on your excellent trophy win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 4:52 AM Some things are funnier in hindsight :-D Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues December 5, 2021 at 5:15 PM LOL! Congratulations on first place! Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 4:52 AM Thank you Kim!

L Milton Hankins December 5, 2021 at 5:06 PM My heartiest congratulations, Avery, on your top win in my humorous couplet contest. I laughed out loud every time I read this one. Good job! Avery Won December 6, 2021 at 4:51 AM Yay! Thank you so much! When you have two kids under 5, you have to have a sense of humor to survive :)