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Life Water

The woman is she
who waits for a dream 
hers are the treasures of pleasures she brings
her gift to the one
whom caresses her soul
the river you’ll know where her life water flows

The woman is she
who waits to let go
of all inhibition and boundaries she knows 
for the one she can trust
to reach deeply inside 
where you have to let go cause there’s nowhere to hide 

Where all is exposed
no secrets are found
no problems or worries or thoughts are you bound
the moments transcending 
this most sacred place
washed warm in her life water rivers embrace 

The woman is she 
who secretly yearns
to know the sweet scars of a passionate burn
As called by the river 
from deeply inside
It can’t be ignored so it won’t be denied 

The woman is she 
whom is waiting for you 
waiting for just the right magic you do
to take to her river
where life waters flow
where the truest of lovers are destined to go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcconnell Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Superb pen Jeannie, great rhyme and flow with excellent word choice. Blessings always,Gordon
Cronin Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Thank you, Gordon
Rose  Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 11:20 AM
You don't miss a single heart beat here, when you write like this, I love the rhythm and the flowing words of love and affection dear Jeannie. Thank you for sharing y our talented pen today, :)
Cronin Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Thank You. Seems these days I am writing more from a place of frustration than anything else. The holiday spirit is having a hard time finding a crack in my walls. I’ve never been this close to giving up on hope before, it’s a sad and terrible feeling I wouldn’t wish on anyone yet still know there are far too many with whom these feelings I share.
Ball Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Nicely done Jeannie. This makes me think of a young girl who waits anxiously to fall in love and wonders what it will be like. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
Cronin Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 9:10 PM
Thanks Judy, glad you enjoyed it.
Turner Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Excellent penning Jeannie. I wish I had found a woman like you describe. Have a gtreat holiday season.
Cronin Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 6:04 AM
Thanks Daniel, it’s never too late, you never know…
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