Life Want To See U, Without Icu

I can’t believe, I am in ICU

Now that I am, Life want to see U
From ICU, THROUGH ICU... ... ...

Retrospecting.... .... ...
Using morality and spirituality as a cornerstone
Devotedly set off to build mansion of success
Laid Foundation solid, walls incomplete for right stones

Fear of losing or sense of deprivation never put me down
FAITH in HIM, not barring belief that I am chosen one
Chose HIS mission to raise the bar in everyone

Now that I am in ICU
Life want to see U, BEYOND ICU... ... ...

Introspecting.... ... ...
Many believe, ICU is a stage between Life and Death
However, Life is stage, ICU the break-in-between
Karma’s audience evaluating life-death cycle umpteen

Worry never resolves, Destiny ever evolves
In HIM Life's solution lies, in death too HIS solution lies 
Nobody can create vacuum, NO BODY can fill vacuum 

Now that I am in ICU
Life, want to see U, WITHOUT ICU... ... ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/14/2010 7:22:00 AM
Interesting thoughts..If this means Intensive Care Unit of a hospital, sorry to hear that you have been so ill...May your health return and you prosper in good health for the years to come..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2010 1:38:00 PM
ICU is the break-in-between on either. Wish you well to come out of the ICU and see life, Hitendra
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