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Life Under Glass

Some memories grow sweeter With time, it seems to me But sugary delusions Soon lose their validity In truth, life happens here and now Alive in present tense Life ebbs and flows, it dims and glows Not always making sense I capture life in pen and ink With photographs and paint But colors find it hard to breathe Under constant restraint Captured life is hindered As a butterfly contained True beauty is not realized When wings fold up-restrained Life is like a butterfly Beauty revealed in flight No human hand can captivate The soul’s true inner light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/19/2008 9:39:00 AM
Wonderfully written, I will add you to my favorites!!! Elizabeth
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Date: 11/14/2008 1:04:00 AM
"No human hand can captivate the soul's true inner light"...Love this line. It is a very good poem, nice imagery....Raul
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Date: 11/13/2008 12:05:00 PM
Whoa. This gave me chills. Excellent all the way through but that last verse could be a poem in itself. Outstanding. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/13/2008 7:44:00 AM
We need to enjoy every moment. I've tried to live that way. This was an exceptional write. Vince
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Date: 11/13/2008 7:11:00 AM
Quite a lovely verse. Some nice, evocative language and imagery. Totally concur about "sugary delusions" and this assertion: "In truth, life happens here and now Alive in present tense" Question: you eschew puncuation. Why? Stanza 4 is your strongest IMO; meter is perfect w/o becoming sing-song. Closing line makes your verse's argument. I will be reading more of your work. :)
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