Life Time Race

every year a new base 
every day a new race 

works often done 
life always runs 


thinking past of ......
walking fast as...


life always run 
without new base


minding up down
thinking lane down


race rather goes ,
for everyone here ,


no hurry in between
for been furious in between 


do not be fast so  means,
do not be much slow 


it can hang you up
and can shut you down

race always goes 
if you are together 


there can be a  success for you 
for those ,
who winds up the race.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 3/5/2013 9:48:00 AM
Sweet :) !! _Saanvi
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Date: 3/4/2013 12:27:00 AM
wow awesome poem i love it nazmi
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