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Life Spent - All Alone


Life Spent - All Alone


When I spend time at the old nursing home
     to see a loved one in our family,
it breaks my heart to see those all alone
     just sitting, waiting, by the wall to see

if I might be someone they'll know today
     who came to visit, spend a little while-
show them they are remembered in some way;
     so sad to pass each waiting- as I smile,

pained eyes meet mine, and anguish fills my heart-
     they search for love- to feel that they belong.
Day after day, abandoned- not a part
     of family or friends for which they long.

They sit and stare with mournful faces raised-
     lined up against the wall, alone and dazed.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Choices
Sponsor: Sara Kendrick
Judged: 06/20/2019

~2nd Place~
Contest: Abandon 2
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri
Judged: 07/25/2018
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Gentry Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Haight Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Thank you once again, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra . I enjoyed reading this heartfelt well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Thank you, Eve. I really appreciate your visit, congrats, and support. Hugs, Sandra
Lindley Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 6:11 AM
An exceptional sonnet my good friend. Inspires me this fine morn. A fav.. a gleaming gem ..
Haight Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thank you so much, Robert, for your kind comment and Fav. I am honored and very appreciative! Sandra :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 8:59 AM
This is sad, congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Thank you very much, Richard, for your visit, congrats and supportive comment. Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 4:46 AM
Sandra, My daughter Jennifer worked in a convalescent hospital for ten years as a nurse. She and her therapy husky brought much joy to those who were alone. She used to have movie night every friday for them on her own time. They adored her. Your poem reminded me of her time spent there. Congratulations on this lovely winning poem taking second place. : )
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Connie, what amazing acts of kindness and support your dear daughter offers to these patients who are so fortunate to know her. That warmed my heart! Thank you so much for your lovely comments and congrats...always much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Man Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 12:29 PM
I can see it.. so well written!
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Thank you very much, Lyric Man! Sandra
Stebbings Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 5:09 AM
I know exactly what you mean, Sandra. You have expressed this so well. Good luck in the contest. // Barry
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thank you very much, Barry. Much appreciated. Sandra
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