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Life Sometimes

Life sometimes Has been nothing more than raging streams cascading over the sharp edges of rocky dreams. Surging down sculptured mountain sides so steep where dreams splinter, reflected in troubled sleep. Remnants of, go beyond recognition, no longer to keep within the subconscious confines of one’s memory hoard, yet, once filed, the virtuous, the debauched become stored forever more, upon one’s synaptic cleft, to become scored. It seems that much of my stuff is habitually subjective. Seldom has it been that they are of the stuff that is objective. My thoughts, my feelings, my words are mostly selective. They all come from past memories that are reflective. B. J. “A ” 2 November 27th 2018

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Date: 10/15/2019 11:44:00 AM
Lines of sweetness, thoughts of goodness, a complete piece, wonderful craft.
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William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 10/15/2019 10:06:00 PM
----------------------------------------------------------------- Wm. J. Atfield Jr. bja2mgmenter@gmail.com Tuesday October 15th, 2019, 8:06 PM Good evening Makama : Thank you for stopping by and viewing some of my stuff !!!, Makama. I am flattered by your analysis “ Lines of sweetness, thoughts of goodness, a complete piece, wonderful craft. ” of my stuff. Certainly way beyond anything I would have thought or stated, but I do thank you !!! As Always B. J. “A ” 2

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