Life Shapes

Life Shapes


gravity saves me
watching my thoughts spin away
grasping to maintain
scraps from my reality
combine to keep me living

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/18/2010 12:15:00 PM
Excellent tanka, Jimbo! The process you describe pretty much sums up life as I know it. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/18/2010 5:25:00 AM
Hi Jimbo! "scraps from my reality combine to keep me living"---Great! And thanky for your comments...Gert
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:54:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/17/2010 4:02:00 AM
Interesting idea in this one for we are shaped by life...It can make us bitter or better...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 3/17/2010 12:48:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/16/2010 11:41:00 PM
this is a very thoughtful piece..everytime I read iT I get another idea of what it means. Love it. BG
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Date: 3/16/2010 11:29:00 PM
Life shapes..indeed.. Life molds and crafts,form and disform..enjoyed reading you..Hope those thoughts spinning away would be replaced..by others which bring you sunhine in your life..Charma.
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