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Life Shapes

Life Shapes gravity saves me watching my thoughts spin away grasping to maintain scraps from my reality combine to keep me living

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2010 12:15:00 PM

Excellent tanka, Jimbo! The process you describe pretty much sums up life as I know it. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/18/2010 5:25:00 AM

Hi Jimbo! "scraps from my reality combine to keep me living"---Great! And thanky for your comments...Gert

Brian Strand

Date: 3/18/2010 12:54:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments Jim.Rgds Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/17/2010 4:02:00 AM

Interesting idea in this one for we are shaped by life...It can make us bitter or better...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 3/17/2010 12:48:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Jim.Rgds Brian

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/16/2010 11:41:00 PM

this is a very thoughtful piece..everytime I read iT I get another idea of what it means. Love it. BG

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/16/2010 11:29:00 PM

Life shapes..indeed.. Life molds and crafts,form and disform..enjoyed reading you..Hope those thoughts spinning away would be replaced..by others which bring you sunhine in your life..Charma.