Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Poet Free verse

Life Pressure

Children begin by loving their parents; as they grow older they judge them; sometimes they forgive them."
                               Quote by _Oscar Wilde


Life pressure 
can bring negative 
Aspects when some parents
And their children don't respond to it. 
Sometimes some parents 
Can fail their responsibilities 
And their children grow up with much 
Anger toward them. 

Life pressure, 
It always happens 
for some children to cut connections 
with their parents whenever  
they are successful 
in life. 
And others care for their parents 
Forgetting the hard journey 
They passed through 
Because of the negligence 
Of their parents.

Writing Challenge - C Quotes - Poetry Contest 
June 1st 2023 Sponsored by: 
Constance La France

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Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2023 at 12:17 PM - Congratulations on your win...great poem, Alfonso - Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris June 6, 2023 at 11:07 PM Thank you so much...Anne. Your visit and kind comment mean a lot to me. Your most welcome

Alexis Y. June 4, 2023 at 1:10 PM Hi Alfonso, This a good write on Life Pressure. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris June 5, 2023 at 5:51 AM Hello Alexis, Happy for your concerns to this and others.... Your visits and comments always means a lot to me. Your most welcome.

Sara Kendrick June 4, 2023 at 2:50 AM Creative way to go with this winning work in Constance's contest. Congratulations. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris June 5, 2023 at 5:53 AM Wow...Thank you so much for this kind encouragement , concern , compliment on this page...Sara. Your most welcome.

Christuraj Alex June 4, 2023 at 1:34 AM A very beautifully written work on Life Pressure. Congratulations! Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris June 5, 2023 at 5:47 AM Thank you so much for this nice ... encouraging comment. Christuraj, Your most welcome

Constance La France June 3, 2023 at 7:11 PM Alfonso, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done ! Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris June 5, 2023 at 5:46 AM Thank you so much for the visit and wise comment. Happy for the placement. Your most welcome...La France.