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Life On Hold

As your dreaming one night, a voice speaks to you telling you this, look at yourself, from the outside, step out of your body and take a look. What do you see? Put your life on pause and look around of what you have become, click the re-wind button of your life, stopping here and there. Playing some parts, passing others by, now fast foreward to the present, look at your self, the way others do. Are there changed you can make, I do think you can do better, so why don't you give it a try. Waking up, you look around the room you're all alone, still you wonder, tomorrow changes you will make. wrote 4-12-07

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/22/2008 5:49:00 AM
Very introspective with good advice. We can always strive to change ourselves for the better. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/21/2008 3:14:00 PM
If only the perfect ones could see their faults...Always, Christy
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Date: 7/21/2008 11:53:00 AM
deep man real deep and very true we all could work on something bout us everyone
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