Life On a Stormy Sea

Hours of stressful birthing was an arduous task.
From Mother's waters I was pushed and drawn.
Since then, I've wondered, is it too much to ask
for a gentler method for a child to be spawn
then to be tossed into the stream of life to bask.
I paddled on a stormy sea yelling, "Bring it on!!"

I soon learned to accept the wisdom of Donne's,
'No Man Is an Island.' My choices took a toll on me.
I traipsed on stepping stones; watched setting suns.
Shorelines held no appeal, for I belonged to the sea
Life was a series of rom-coms and dramatic reruns.
I felt like I was homeless, floating in life's debris.

I swam with the ebbing tide, seeking a placid shore
where my hopes and dreams would not drift away.
I yearned for this, and something worth much more,
a heart bound with mine until our hair turned gray.
Are these few trenchant things too much to ask for?
If not, I'd be complacent any where and every day.


October 9, 2021
Islands in the Stream Contest
Sponsored by:  Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 10/16/2021 8:51:00 AM
Superb write, Jenna! Congrats on your brilliant win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 5:32:00 PM
I’m so glad you liked it so well, Seeker. Thank you.
Date: 10/16/2021 8:23:00 AM
Another beautiful poem, Jenna! Congratulations on your win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 5:31:00 PM
Thanks for your kind remarks, Ann.
Date: 10/15/2021 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. I really enjoyed your "Life on a Stormy Sea" write. Have a blessed autumn day......................
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Date: 10/18/2021 5:31:00 PM
I’m pleased you enjoyed the read, Paula. Thanks!!
Date: 10/14/2021 8:45:00 PM
A beautiful poem with the message of being communitarian. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 5:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris.
Date: 10/9/2021 8:59:00 AM
Fine writing, Jenna, and perfect for Craig's contest. Best wishes.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2021 6:08:00 AM
I honestly don't know what Craig would consider 'good,' but I wrote what I hope is appropriate. Thank you very much, Milt.
Date: 10/9/2021 8:06:00 AM
A great narrative. One hopes to evade such escapades. :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/9/2021 8:49:00 AM
Yes, Victor. Feeling like you're alone and unhappy in any phase of life has got to be unrewarding.
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