Life On a Stormy Sea

Hours of stressful birthing was an arduous task.
From Mother's waters I was pushed and drawn.
Since then, I've wondered, is it too much to ask
for a gentler method for a child to be spawn
then to be tossed into the stream of life to bask.
I paddled on a stormy sea yelling, "Bring it on!!"

I soon learned to accept the wisdom of Donne's,
'No Man Is an Island.' My choices took a toll on me.
I traipsed on stepping stones; watched setting suns.
Shorelines held no appeal, for I belonged to the sea
Life was a series of rom-coms and dramatic reruns.
I felt like I was homeless, floating in life's debris.

I swam with the ebbing tide, seeking a placid shore
where my hopes and dreams would not drift away.
I yearned for this, and something worth much more,
a heart bound with mine until our hair turned gray.
Are these few trenchant things too much to ask for?
If not, I'd be complacent any where and every day.


October 9, 2021
Islands in the Stream Contest
Sponsored by:  Craig Cornish
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Seeker Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Superb write, Jenna! Congrats on your brilliant win!
Logan Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 5:32 PM
I’m so glad you liked it so well, Seeker. Thank you.
Peck Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Another beautiful poem, Jenna! Congratulations on your win.
Logan Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 5:31 PM
Thanks for your kind remarks, Ann.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. I really enjoyed your "Life on a Stormy Sea" write. Have a blessed autumn day......................
Logan Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 5:31 PM
I’m pleased you enjoyed the read, Paula. Thanks!!
Alex Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 8:45 PM
A beautiful poem with the message of being communitarian. Congratulations!
Logan Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 5:30 PM
Thanks so much, Chris.
Hankins Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Fine writing, Jenna, and perfect for Craig's contest. Best wishes.
Logan Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 6:08 AM
I honestly don't know what Craig would consider 'good,' but I wrote what I hope is appropriate. Thank you very much, Milt.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 8:06 AM
A great narrative. One hopes to evade such escapades. :)
Logan Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 8:49 AM
Yes, Victor. Feeling like you're alone and unhappy in any phase of life has got to be unrewarding.
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