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Life Not Tasted

Aimless
Shameless
Nameless
Claimless
Downward, his life's path:  Aimless, shameless
A legacy lost:  Nameless, claimless

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2019 5:29:00 PM

I don't really remember the rules of this form but I really like this how it reads and SOUNDS. Fave on this one!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/7/2019 8:15:00 PM

Wow. A Fave. Thank you so much, Andrea. From you, this is high praise, indeed. Best wishes, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/7/2019 7:40:00 AM

Nicely done! I have written a few of these!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/7/2019 1:09:00 PM

I will have to look for them (your tyburns). Thanks for letting me know. :) gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/5/2019 5:39:00 PM

You aced this form, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/6/2019 10:57:00 PM

I guess this means that this tyburn 'makes the grade!' Thank you so much, Line. ~ gw

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/5/2019 12:58:00 PM

What a lost soul this would be - you see plenty under bridges - what brought them to this claimless destitute situation. Great write Gershon, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/5/2019 2:28:00 PM

In Chicago, they're out actively begging at busy intersections… Someone once told me, 'Everyone is someone's precious baby...' It all makes one wonder. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/5/2019 12:57:00 PM

Such a skilled, insightful tyburn, gw (will have to try on a tyburn soon!)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/5/2019 2:26:00 PM

Thanks for the encouragement, Michelle. Now the question is this: Should you try on a tyburn, or should you tie on a tryburn? As Trump always says, "We'll see what happens..." (Hope you're not irritated that I invoked 'him.' Whenever he says that, I chuckle). Best wishes, gw

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