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Life Lines

Life Lines When I look at Grandma’s face there’s a great deal I can see. Every furrow shows a trace of her family’s history. There’s a line for every struggle every victory she’s won. There are tender lines for daughters and generous ones for sons. Beneath her eyes lines of sorrow show how many tears she’s cried yet around her mouth as many show her laughter and her pride. Grandma’s face is full of charm and for every line I see a gentle spirit revealed in her love for family.

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Date: 6/9/2020 10:07:00 PM
You were blessed to have your grandparents around awhile. Wonderful write Susan. Enjoyed reading.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 6/10/2020 7:58:00 AM
I really was Michael. Thank you. Blessings
Date: 2/7/2019 10:27:00 PM
Your tribute to both of your grandmothers is heartfelt and makes me feel joyful and glad. I did not know my maternal grandmother, but my paternal one who has been gone since 1964 was wonderful! The kindest person in the world probably.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 2/8/2019 11:46:00 AM
Thank you Caren. I was lucky to have my grandmothers for many years. Both were like yours, kind. If you were hungry, they'd invite you in. Hugs Caren.
Date: 2/7/2019 2:30:00 PM
There is so much love an appreciation here, beautiful tribute!
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 2/7/2019 3:11:00 PM
Thank you kindly Michelle. Both of my grandmothers were wonderful and each lived to 94. Blessings Michelle, Susan

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