Life Lines

Life Lines

When I look at Grandma’s face
there’s a great deal I can see.
Every furrow shows a trace
of her family’s history.

There’s a line for every struggle
every victory she’s won.
There are tender lines for daughters
and generous ones for sons.

Beneath her eyes lines of sorrow
show how many tears she’s cried
yet around her mouth as many
show her laughter and her pride.

Grandma’s face is full of charm
and for every line I see
a gentle spirit revealed
in her love for family.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Tor Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 10:07 PM
You were blessed to have your grandparents around awhile. Wonderful write Susan. Enjoyed reading.
Jeavons Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 7:58 AM
I really was Michael. Thank you. Blessings
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 10:27 PM
Your tribute to both of your grandmothers is heartfelt and makes me feel joyful and glad. I did not know my maternal grandmother, but my paternal one who has been gone since 1964 was wonderful! The kindest person in the world probably.
Jeavons Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Thank you Caren. I was lucky to have my grandmothers for many years. Both were like yours, kind. If you were hungry, they'd invite you in. Hugs Caren.
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February 7, 2019 at 2:30 PM
There is so much love an appreciation here, beautiful tribute!
Jeavons Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Thank you kindly Michelle. Both of my grandmothers were wonderful and each lived to 94. Blessings Michelle, Susan
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