Life Is What You Make It

Birth: the first step to journey’s end.
We cannot travel and pretend
That our paths will be all straight
And leave the helm to luck, not faith.
There will be chasms full of gloom
Where evil spirits hide and loom
The eerie feelings forecast doom
And wide-eyed flowers do not bloom;
There will be dangers hard to count
So many mountains to surmount
The angry waves will roll and pound
While furious winds despoil the ground
The weary feet will turn to lead
It will be hard to forge ahead.
But are we going to give in
To the backstabbing from within
Become a prey to currents’ might
Or beat retreat and take to flight?
Oh no my friend! That’s not the way
To reap the fruit of our stay
On this domain where life must rise
Above the slime; so let’s be wise
To turn defeat into a win
To put a stop to faults and sin
To change the darkness into light
To not submit without a fight
To find the means to learn to cope
So that we travel on with hope
Till when we give the final breath
We cross the bridge to life, not death.



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Author: Paul Callus ~ 16/03/2014
Contest: Life is what you make it!
Sponsor: Dave Wood
Placing: 1st
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Montalbo Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 12:31 PM
Very profound and true to life i really enjoyed Reading this piece... Gina
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April 22, 2014 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Gina! Am so glad that you enjoyed it. cu // paul
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April 18, 2014 at 10:29 PM
PAULLLLLLLLLL!! That is amazing stuff. I enjoyed every word . Very mesmerizing to say the least. And I am not saying the least HAHA!! It was really good form the beginning to the end. And it is true Life is what you make it. Thanks for all your supporting comments on my poems as well. And any criticism is welcomed to.(;) Karen
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April 22, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Wow Karen!! Such lovely comments! What can I say!! Thank you so very much :) positive feedback is soooo encouraging. You're a gem :) be seeing you....paul
Ward Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 10:09 AM
How the hell do you compose something like this If only I had half you'r brain BRILLIANT REGARDS. MIKE. WARD
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Hi Michael !! You are too kind !! Thank you :) Unfortunately many of us underrate our own work, don't do the same with yours. All of us have our own different ways of expressing ourselves. cu around. // paul
Thomas Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 7:48 AM
I have to say, this one really deserved 1st place. A sensible, and well penned poem.
Callus Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Very many thanks Angie; pleased to have you visiting and leaving your positive comments. cu around :) // paul
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March 27, 2014 at 9:31 AM
love it, and I see congratulations are in order too Paul .xx
Callus Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Hi Mandy, welcome to my posts! Thank you for the lovely comments; much appreciated :) hope to see you around. // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 9:16 AM
I can see why this one was chosen for top honor. Congratulations.
Callus Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 9:25 AM
Once again I thank you for your encouraging comments. Your visits are much appreciated. // paul
Enriquez Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 8:13 PM
Dear Paul: Very very inspirational words. Lovely read, my friend. All the best then. Leon
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 5:08 AM
Thank you Leon. Glad you liked it my friend. // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 2:48 PM
" the backstabbing from within Become a prey to currents’ might".... I like this line... :) for we humans must not compete with anyone but just our ownself.. by our fears, by our dreams, by our goals and all else... it with in us... we are the captain, general, president the leader in our journey to life.. :) MUCH CONGRATULATIONS..! I appreciate your comments on my writings.. :) im flattered that I'm one of those you considered reading.. :) GOD bless you always.. +olive_eloi with handshake
Callus Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 4:08 PM
First of all I must thank you for looking up my posts and commenting on my poems. Feedback is always important; other people's criticism makes a lot of difference. When I comment on your poems I try to be as honest as possible, after doing my best to go to the depth of the message that you try to pass on. :) cu // paul
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March 22, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Paul . A well-deserved win. Cheers hugsss ;)
Callus Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 12:02 PM
Thank you Maria, both for the visit and for the lovely comment & hugs :) // paul
Collins Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 9:04 AM
Dear Paul - What beauty you portray, poetically and in message. Brings to mind Henry Wadsworth Longfellow - psalm of life. You are a master and I more appreciate your comment on To Thine Own Self be True love, Kathy
Callus Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Thank you dear Kathryn for your lovely comments; they are much appreciated. Will make time to visit your posts, too. Take care. // paul
Gasun Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 7:41 AM
An excellent inspirational poem you've penned here my dear friend Paul. I love it and extremely enjoyed reading it this afternoon. To my fave. TYSM for sharing & kudos to u on this great write. TYSM as well for your precious time reading my latest poem. I'll be back to read more of your poem soon. More blessings and good luck in the contest. love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Callus Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 8:51 AM
Hi Leonora. It is great to have you visiting. Thank you for your kind comments; much appreciated :) Last time, I was going to take part in your contest "Daddy", but in the last minute I decided not to since I did not want to invade your political privacy with my submission. // cu // paul
La France Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 9:32 AM
Paul, well done, a very well written, moving and inspirational poem, best of luck in the contest
Callus Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Hi BW! Nice to have you stopping by and passing such lovely comments :) thanks a lot. // paul
Cee Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Paul, I like the way it talks about life with various situations... especially, the last line. CONGRATULATIONS!
Callus Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 5:59 AM
Welcome Elai; thank you for stopping by and for your lovely comments. :) // paul
Virden Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 9:08 AM
Beautifully written, preciously true, incredibly encouraging! 10+ :-)
Callus Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Sarai you are so kind!:) Thank you for, not only visiting, but also for the 10+ and all those lovely comments. :) // paul
Jerden Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:57 PM
Well done, Paul! Congratulations! I see a lot of good comments already, so I'm gonna check out a different one of yours.
Callus Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Hi Roy, thank you for stopping by and commenting :) cu around // paul
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March 19, 2014 at 7:24 PM
I agree that we will cross that bridge from death to life..It is not something that we all want to do today but it is reassuring to know that in the hereafter that life will come to its fullness with no pain or sorrow..Thanks for the visit to my page..You comments are uplifting..Sara
Callus Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 11:56 AM
Thank you Sara for visiting and for your welcome comments. // paul
Carrillo Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:05 PM
Paul; This is an awesome poem. I agree with you. I like to believe that life is like a dream and death is when you wake up. Many blessings... Lucilla
Callus Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 11:55 AM
Hi Lucilla! Thank you for your lovely comments...and for the blessings :) much appreciated. // paul
Hamilton Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:20 PM
in depth poem Paul that tells it like it is great pen hugs
Callus Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 11:33 AM
You are too kind Shadow :) Thank you very much. cu // paul
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March 19, 2014 at 4:42 PM
Hi Paul, Nice seeing you on the winning list a day...~ <3 LINDA
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:56 PM
Hi Linda, thanks a lot; will be having a nice (day) night...over here in Malta it's 11 pm. :) // paul
Manassian Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 3:27 PM
I didn't know you'd won, but I can certainly see why! This is absolutely amazing! WOW! So many beautiful lines! The call to give it our all, Paul. Superb write. :) I loved the same lines as Tim did! :)
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Thank you so much Eileen /x/ I don't have to tell, but I will just the same...your encouraging comments sure are a morale booster. :):) // paul
Ryerson Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 12:40 PM
Favorite two lines: 'And wide-eyed flowers do not bloom' and 'To the backstabbing from within'. WOW...Congrats - Tim
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Hi Tim! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments. Will be back to you again. // paul
Raj Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations. Touching my soul. Keep the poetic flame glowing Shall slumber in the warmth.
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 12:38 PM
Many thanks Sam; appreciate your glowing comments:) // paul
Onclaud Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:25 AM
i knew this would be a topper, paul.. big applaue on your win!.. huggs
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Hi Nette! Thank you for your lovely comments :) and for the faith you had in me! /x/ paul
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:25 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "Life is what YOU make it!" Sponsored by: Dave Wood. - Wonderful win, Paul ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Thank you :) Your welcome praise unfailingly appreciated :) /x/ paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:03 AM
"To the backstabbing from within Become a prey to currents’ might", i like this.. :) it's a challenging, motivating and inspirational prose.. :) i'm privilege that i read some of your comments on my writings.. :) God bless.. and WARM CONGRATULATIONS!! === olive_eloi
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:54 AM
Thank you for your honest and lovely comments Olive E. Glad you don't mind how I comment on your poems :):) cu around for sure. // paul
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