Life Is What You Make It

birth of love brings new life
in her eyes he is the one
future of his he says she is
love blooms more and more each day
promises become broken
darkness draw nears for her pain in deep
her heart pounds silently in his hands
his hurtful words ring in her head
tears flow like a river down her face
darkness enters her eyes
an evil prescence enters around them
dark clouds releases acidic rain upon them
frozen time stands as she falls
her heart he smashes
death awaits for her
kisses of poison he gives her
her lips crack and shatter
darkness consumes her skin
suddenly she turns to dust
in the wind forever will she glide
a soul in the hands of death
evil forever gone from the world
light shines done bright upon all
darkness evaporates from alls eyes
happiness to all from her death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 3/27/2014 9:38:00 AM
I love this poem...I love how you captured my attention from beginning to end. And this is a deserving win!! Congrats!
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:49:00 PM
Cassandra, It is what it is, and I love what you made of this poem... Congrats. ~have a nice day~ <3 LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:37:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "Life is what YOU make it!" Sponsored by: Dave Wood. - Wonderful win, Cassandra ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/18/2014 10:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest on Life, cassandra
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Date: 3/18/2014 9:23:00 PM
Cassandra, congrats on your winning poem. ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/18/2014 8:55:00 PM
Ahhh..wonderfully done.....congratulations
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Date: 3/14/2014 4:20:00 PM
- Well done for the contest,Cassandra - Good luck !!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/14/2014 3:32:00 PM
profound...and yet so sad.
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