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Life Is Sweet

Life is sweet, humming to a pretty tune I’ve always known somehow The notes I hear the instruments, the sounds they make have not yet been invented here Life is sweet, colouring my days with harmony within me Frequencies of green and blue, pink and yellow cannot describe how I feel Pinks and yellows cannot describe how happy I feel

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Date: 1/16/2025 7:58:00 PM
Indeed a sweet poem.Really enjoyed it.
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Janny Vellinga
Date: 1/16/2025 11:17:00 PM
Thank you for letting me know
Date: 1/11/2025 3:02:00 PM
I love your style with each word carrying significance. Some joyful things cannot be fully explained, close, but not fully. You captured that in this poem! In these difficult times, remembrance that life is indeed sweet is important and healing!!!
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Janny Vellinga
Date: 1/12/2025 1:34:00 AM
Wow thank you for your wonderful comment. I cannot agree more that in these times it is important to realise and feel the sweetness of life, that is always there
Date: 1/10/2025 8:15:00 PM
Dear Janny, I love the repeating lines in this well-crafted poem. And yes, "harmony within me" ... I could relate.
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Janny Vellinga
Date: 1/12/2025 1:30:00 AM
Daar Moon, thank you for your nice comment. Good to near you can relate. Enjoy your day
Date: 1/10/2025 9:56:00 AM
Hello Jenny, I love this poem. I enjoyed to read. I like pink and I like yellow. I also like purple. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2025 3:49:00 AM
Hello Jenny, we do like the same colors. ?Darlene/
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Janny Vellinga
Date: 1/12/2025 1:25:00 AM
Hello Darlene, Thank you. I also like purple. Pink stands for love in thuis poem, yellow for joy. Have a great day, Janny
Date: 1/10/2025 7:45:00 AM
This had a synesthegic effect. I felt like I ate your happiness in colours. Yum.
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Janny Vellinga
Date: 1/10/2025 9:38:00 AM
Thank you

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