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Life Is Sifting Sand

What more could I have done? I'd already taken far too much.
There was no more gentleness in your voice, nor in your touch.

Your cursing and verbal abuse eroded all my respect for you.
I tried to help fight your demon; something only you could do.

Our home became just a house. We lived under the same roof
but stormy weather poured in from your bottle of 100 proof.

With a sob in my throat,  I walked away from you while crying.
Your lies and accusations ripped me apart and left me dying.

                             life is sifting sand
                    I still wear your wedding band
                            upon my left hand

There was no getting back what we lost when you caused my fears.
How did I swallow the disappointment? I washed it down with tears.

The finale' came the night you slammed my hand in the door.
The only broken bone I ever had; I couldn't take it any more.

What else could I have possibly done to keep from losing you?
It was too late when you lost yourself, and now we're through.

Sometimes I wish we'd never met. You deceived me from the start.
I will never regret loving you, and I've forgiven you in my heart.

                              life is sifting sand
                   you removed your wedding band
                         gone from your left hand

Once my world revolved all around you, my sunny days and skies of blue.
Now you're just a stranger, someone I once loved, someone I once knew.


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2/1/2016   The Dark Side of Love
 Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Konos Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Congratulations....Number WON!
Lane Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Thank you sooo much, Judy!
Onclaud Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:33 PM
how intense, lin.. congrats on your shining win.. huggs
Lane Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Oh merci, merci, Nette!
Cheema Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Lin, to take such crap from a heartless person is amazing! Congrats on your wonderful placement!
Lane Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Thanks a whole lot, Balveen ;)
Kimathi Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Hi Lin. Congrats for your deep and insightful piece!! ;-)
Lane Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 7:51 AM
I thank you for your kind compliments, Teddy ;)
Jameson Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:22 PM
A truthful write, Lin. A lot of power in each line...congratulations on the win, but more so on your ability to put these words on paper. Well done my friend, a solid piece of work.
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:37 PM
It took an emotional toll, Sam, but it's a way of venting anger, sorrow, what was and what could've been. Thank you for your kind comments.
Haight Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Brought tears to my eyes, Lin. I deeply felt your hurt. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra. I truly appreciate your sympathy over my sorrow. I'm all better now...it only took a few years...sigh. ;)
Scars Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Wow, Lin wonderful and well deserved top placement. Congrats Lin :) *Smiles* -luloo
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Thank you, Laura. It's a win I am honored to share with you. ;)
Gentry Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on your win with this raw, emotional, well-written poem. Many of us have gotten out of such situations, thank God. Many of us are still in them. Most of us find the outside scar the final straw when the inside scars are hardest to heal. So glad you made it, excellent way to let others know it can be done and help yourself as well. A 7
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Susan. When respect is lost, there is little left to hold on to, and you're right. It took the physical pain to make me realize I didn't want to be hurt emotionally any longer.
Williams Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:58 AM
I know this is one 1st place you'd rather not have,but since you've already paid for it...I'm so happy to hear that you made out alive. Congratulations.
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:06 AM
That's such a thoughtful comment, Scott. I really appreciate you for the kindness. Thank you.
Turner Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Truthfully, I did not read many of these poems, they are too raw and upsetting. I realize it needs to be discussed and dealt with but nevertheless, they are just a little too dark Agreed? Congrats, Lin. You deserve the win.
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:40 AM
I did read those on the list and I DO agree they are dark and not a subject that is easy to digest. I wish my poem hadn't had factual roots, but it did, and it has always helped me to deal with the hurt and anger by writing about my pain. I'm sorry it's disturbing, but thank you for your honest opinion, Daniel, and for the nice compliment.
Hamilton Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:25 AM
the depth is superb Lin a truly great poem congrats on 1st place hugs
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:28 AM
I want to thank you so very much for the win, Shadow. I enjoyed taking part in your contest. Huggin ya back!
Allison Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:08 AM
So deep and touching Lin such powerful words beautifully penned. Congrats on your top spot in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:19 AM
Thanks so much, Jan, and congrats back to you.
Mcconnell Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:10 AM
superb indeed Lin, such sadness conveyed but so touching one's heart too. a beautiful penned piece indeed!
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 4:56 AM
I thank you very much for your kindest of comments, Gordon.
Sage Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 4:02 PM
so sad...touching, well penned Lin, well penned...heartfelt...and best of luck in the contest
Lane Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Thank you. I'm so much better off now, but it was a very painful few years.
George   Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:47 AM
I lived this too, over twenty years ago. It is so devastating and I thought I would never survive it, but I did and now have a wonderful life and a true love. This is so heartfelt and beautifully written. Lin.
Lane Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Elaine, I'm so sorry you had to go through such a painful time. It's taken me 3 years to get over him, at least mostly, but I'm happy now. I like my freedom from wondering, 'what happens today?' Thank you for sharing a bit of your past with me ;)
Konos Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Well Lin Lane with the cute name if this doesn't take Number Won ....I think a lobotomy might be in order...
Lane Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:52 AM
You're comments always make me smile or laugh. This one is laughter level! Judy, if the lobotomy is necessary, you can perform it and I'll be your assistant.
Bauer Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:13 PM
this is very powerful and moving, lin. best of luck in the contest...
Lane Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 9:50 PM
Thank you, Ilene.
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