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Life Is of Struggle

ants make their own ways
                                          change when needed for living
                                                  only for few days

                                                  must live any way
                                              educate hears for unity
                                                   life is of struggle

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 5:30:00 PM

Hi Bl, how are you? i love this poem.... I wonder if ants really struggle to make it here and there... enjoyed...pd

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:38:00 AM

Many thanks for reading and reviewing my write. Loved always, bl

Don Johnson

Date: 10/23/2012 3:25:00 PM

life can be pain, intermittent the gain, hell world we are, trapped in our jar, like ants we remain, the masters plan reigns, written in the stars, the truth door ajar, just the same... who to blame, the self yet again, ah hahha... as Bi Devnath writes "Life is of Struggle" Don Johnson

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:39:00 AM

Many thanks for reading and reviewing my write. Loved always, bl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/23/2012 2:12:00 PM

The struggle seems to permeate everything bl. If we want to eat there's likely a struggle as you point out.

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:39:00 AM

Many thanks for reading and reviewing my write. You are absolutely right, my friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2012 1:54:00 PM

Yes, I used to watch ants by my house as a child, watching their industriousness. Some people have to be that way, struggling to survive@

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:41:00 AM

Many thanks for reading and reviewing my write. You in look is fine. Loved always, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/23/2012 1:39:00 PM

POIGNANT WORDS OF POETRY BL .. THE SECOND VERSE ESPECIALLY REVEALING LUV .. MAGNFICENT WORK .. YES LIFE IS A STRUGGLE AND LOVE IS THE KEY ..

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:41:00 AM

Many thanks for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2012 1:03:00 PM

bl, I'm fascinated by this Haiku form, exciting - "all in one" poem .... lol ... - Yours I like very well. - Well done - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:42:00 AM

Many thanks for reading and reviewing my write. Loved always, bl