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Life Is Not Complicated

Softer than snow flurries Slicker than cigarette smoke Sizzling than bouncy bubbles in an open soda can Ticklish like a patient soul after a rouch day Sweeter like a loving tongue Curious like a dog's muzzle sniffing and living Foggy like a neglected sleep Love like cold and grey Introverted like a deck of cards Playdough like mud, like words in poetry, like soles and souls of poetry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/18/2015 6:19:00 AM
Foggy like neglected sleep...one of my favorite lines. :) Warm feelings this evoked. Thanks for visiting my work yesterday. hugs
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:02:00 PM
Thank you too Eileen for visiting me.
Date: 2/17/2015 2:24:00 PM
Njeri, a list of pleasant feelings to a life that should not be complicated. Good write and a 7. Blessings eve
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:01:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 2/17/2015 1:18:00 PM
Life is not complicated But we manage to complicate it when knowledge is missing! Excellent writing presenting life as it should be. What a lovely depiction, dear Njeri! Pure Joy!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios, I very much appreciate your comment.

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