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My Inspiration!!! I love Langston. What an awesome poet! This poem shows that life is worth living even when you lose love....I've written a poem in his honor before

  Nothing should rob you of your smile because....LIFE IS FINE! :)

This life is fine The world is mine Though I can’t stop The hands of time The birds all sing And flowers bloom The sun still shines And chases gloom And I can view The sparkling sea And all the stars Just dance with me The clouds, they hide And I must seek The creatures small At me, they peek The grass is cool Beneath my feet The water dew Now wets my cheek I have true friends A family And hope of an Eternity A place where I Will not fear death Where all is sweet Upon my breath Where tears will cease to touch my face And I am blessed By Heaven’s Grace My life is fine The world is mine This is my time To truly shine Eileen Manassian

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Date: 10/5/2017 7:46:00 PM
I really love ALL your poetry, Eileen. I've read a lot of them but haven't commented til now. Also, this poem is so simple, like Langston's, and I just love "simple". Will visit more often from now on.
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Date: 5/3/2017 11:14:00 PM
This is awesome, Eileen! You must check out Arthur Vaso's poem he wrote for you! It's simply beautiful!
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Date: 8/12/2015 10:17:00 PM
Love stanza number three... so beautiful!!! You are gorgeous by the way! Your smiling spirit is more inspiring than you may know. Glad to see this one this evening. Always, Laura
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Date: 8/12/2015 11:49:00 AM
Wow! an excellent piece. My fav. one. 7 and loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thanks, BL....Time to write happy and positive poems. I sometimes look at the dark side, but....there is much beauty where the sun shines! :) Hugs
Date: 8/12/2015 9:25:00 AM
Beautiful Eileen, I enjoyed this piece that you have infused with positivity. It is indeed your time!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thanks, Richard....Time is transient. If not now...then when? Thanks ever so much for the visit. :)
Date: 8/12/2015 9:01:00 AM
Eileen, I love the positivity of your gem. We all need these kind of reminders about how truly blessed we are. Awesome write :) hugs Wilma
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2015 12:09:00 PM
:) Thanks, Wilma. I am very blessed, and I'm ashamed of myself for not being more grateful for all that I have. Thanks for your visit. I really enjoyed your poem today. Hugs
Date: 8/12/2015 8:25:00 AM
what a wonderful, positive approach to life, dear eileen.. this is contagious, alive.. wow.. huggs!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thanks, Nette. I've been through the wringer of late. Still, one must try to see all the blessings....there are SO many. Thanks for the visit. Hugs! :)
Date: 8/12/2015 7:39:00 AM
Eileen, I enjoyed your poem very much. The power message of be grateful to be alive spoke loud and clear. Thanks for sharing. I love Langston Hughes he's one of my favorite poets. Great job! :-) Alexis 7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2015 7:43:00 AM
Hi, sweetie. Thanks for the visit. I love his poetry about dreams. Thanks for the sweet comments. I'm trying to stay positive despite the negatives in my life! Hugs
Date: 8/12/2015 5:28:00 AM
Simply stunning message Eileen makes me feel glad to be alive! Hugs Jan xx Regarding jadazzle today I will be posting our first poem in 14 months - it is very special to us both - makes me very emotional even reading it!:-) Hugs Jan xx7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2015 9:17:00 AM
You never gave up. I'm so proud of you...
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2015 8:55:00 AM
I love Darren to bits as an amazing friend - I have had more contact with him in the past week than I had in the previous 14 months! I still continued to write to him on a regular basis even though I got very little feedback I just needed him to know he was in my thoughts .... and finally my persistence has paid off :-) hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2015 7:26:00 AM
I'll read it for sure. Yipeee! It's so good to have a person you care about come back! Hugs
Date: 8/12/2015 4:46:00 AM
God has given us a million reasons to live so we ought not annihilate all this reasons for a selfish one! Marvelous poem with a plethora of positive messages, dear Eileen! A seven!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2015 5:24:00 AM
I'm catch up with you soon now that I'm better. I don't wish to miss your wisdom. Ese toso Sophos....
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2015 5:23:00 AM
Thank you, my dear poet. I was emotionally unwell these past two days. Thank God I'm better. Another cause it's that my daughter will be leaving again to study abroad. I've had her with me for one year, and it is so hard to let go. I cry now and again, but I MUST be strong for her sake. Thelo na prosefxeis gia mas...toso diskolee gia mena...efkharisto kai filakia.
Date: 8/12/2015 2:49:00 AM
What a really neat composition. It's a beautiful piece of work. My first ever favourite poem.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2015 3:19:00 AM
Mark! I'm so honored that you would look favorably on this little piece of mine. You have brought a smile. Thank you. I will be by to visit your work soon. :)

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