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Life Is Breath

"Breathing non-stop have you given it a second thought?" "Have no ego. You are nothing without air" - Quote by Author ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Frantic phones to hospitals No bed anywhere Oxygen was in short supply I saw him gasping to breathe He was dying in front of me, I witnessed helplessly Didn't call neighbors Who will help a home quarantined corona patient? What can anybody do? A big gasp and he was gone Officials came, took his body away Alone staring at walls I cried, cried and cried all by myself How will I tell my son, now at my sister's place, that his father is dead? How will I bring him up alone? Wish I were working... I remembered how in darkness of night He would whisper in my ears "I love you" That love gone forever That murmur in low voice early mornings careful son should not wake up Now who will love him that way? He would often say " Don't worry! Enjoy life." If only he had been more careful and cautious If only he had not gone out I dawned to me We are not the brain we are proud of nor the heart that can be replaced neither other body organs not visible nor the body parts we can see We can live sans every thing except breath Once it stops, we are gone! Others look at our body with a sigh Breath is life Breath is everything We are nothing without air Phone rings. It is my sister I lift the phone up and tell her "I am a widow" "Mom how will we manage." I heard my crying son utter Said "Don't worry, have faith in God. Mom is educated" But I was not sure, not confident Body numb, mind blank, still in shock I sat staring at darkness around aware the light of my life is gone forever struggle for survival has just begun 29.04.2021 Contest Name : Writing Prompt - Breathe Sponsor : Constance La France

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Date: 5/10/2021 1:51:00 PM
Rama, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with this beautifully penned and emotional poem, it touched my heart, well done, peace _Constance
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/11/2021 4:28:00 AM
Thanks for the wonderful prompt which gave me an opportunity to create a poem with a message. Thanks for your help too. You are a wonderful judgeand a great person and poet. Take care, God bless!
Date: 5/9/2021 3:13:00 PM
Dear Rama, You have successfully created the picture of a family going through the worst situation. It is heartbreaking, but I understand - it can be real. Congratulations on your top placement. Your comment on my poem is touching. Thank you. Love ~ Mala
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/11/2021 4:24:00 AM
Thanks Mala. Take care, God bless!
Date: 4/29/2021 11:46:00 AM
Hello Rama, wow! A great write.I see why you wrote these verses down. thes things do happen every day. Blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2021 10:31:00 AM
Hello Rama, well i do think you have done a good job of it. right you are pictures can not really show the beauty of nature. You take care to my friend. I like your style in poetry. Blessings my friend.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 4/29/2021 11:56:00 AM
Just to make people read and understand the need to take care. I uploaded a picture from my bedroom in my poem nature from my bedroom. Picture can never be as beautiful as real, but wanted all to see. Thanks for your wonderful comments and visit. Take care, Rama
Date: 4/29/2021 8:26:00 AM
What a brilliant write, Rama! So relevant in these times.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 4/29/2021 9:03:00 AM
Situation around prompted me to write this. Thanks for your wonderful comments. Take care. God bless!
Date: 4/29/2021 7:33:00 AM
WoW! Rama, You used the chosen words to compose a sad and heartbreaking write. I hope this is just a fictional write for the contest. Congratulations in advance. Have a great day-Alexis
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 4/29/2021 9:05:00 AM
It is fiction. Situation around prompted me to write this. People don't understand and go out that too without masks. You too enjoy your day. Take care, God bless!

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