Life Is a River


"We flow like rivers through innumerable birth and rebirth until we achieve salvation" by Author

River of my life, flowing incessantly since it left the sea...

Initially I thought I will chalk out the route only to realise i must follow the path laid out by wind and terrains
Sometimes the roads are smooth and easy but many times there are obstacles to be surmounted
I trudge alone weary and tired desperately needing a rest but I must go on until I reach the ocean

People hurl garage on me. I started out clean, now I am dirty, polluted.
At times I lash out in anger through flood and tsunami, they get scared and stop for a while only to start again.
I have no choice but to endure it all.
Terrain is rough and hard, people around insensitive and selfish but I must go on for I have to reach  the ocean
Until then I cannot rest

Often benevolent God takes me up and sends me back pure and clean. 
Once down the whole process starts all over again.
I trudge alone along the winding up and downs of life without a pause for I am destined to move on until I reach the ocean.

8th March 2021
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Contest Name :Life's Struggles- any form - Updated
Sponsor	: Constance La France

Contest Winner - 1st position

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Date: 3/31/2021 2:54:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Rama!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 4/1/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Smita. Take care,God bless, Rama
Date: 3/17/2021 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and excellent poem. love phyl
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/17/2021 6:55:00 PM
Thanks!Take care, God bless. Rama
Date: 3/10/2021 8:50:00 PM
Rama, congratulations on your win in my Life's Struggle contest with this excellent Free Verse poem, so emotional, it touched my heart and I love your quote, well done _Constance
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/17/2021 6:55:00 PM
Thanks for the inspiration and placement. Take care,God bless! Rama
Date: 3/10/2021 6:39:00 AM
Congrats Rama. Like a Tennyson! Life and River! Well done on your top spot! I am not getting the inspiration to write anymore. will take a break. may be a typo- garage= garbage.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/11/2021 12:27:00 AM
Read the Brook by Tennyson! Men may come and men may go but I go on for ever!!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/10/2021 8:53:00 AM
Thanks! Didn't know Tennyson wrote something like this. What my muse will come up with is a surprise to me. For inspiration read others. It helps me. You can try. My muse too gone. Bit busy too. Submitting poems written few days ago. Take care, God bless!
Date: 3/10/2021 12:49:00 AM
- When you’re struggling in life, take assurance in the fact that everyone else struggles like you do - We may not have similar struggles, but it’s still a struggle nonetheless - Congratulations on your win, Rama :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/10/2021 3:13:00 AM
Thanks Anne. Same to you. Take care, God bless!
Date: 3/9/2021 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations, Rama, on your win. Beautiful poem ~ Mala
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/9/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thanks Mala. Same to you. Take care, God bless!
Date: 3/9/2021 1:19:00 AM
Quite original. I have wondered what I could write but my muse have left me.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/9/2021 12:02:00 PM
Thanks Victor, Take care, God bless!
Date: 3/8/2021 3:52:00 PM
Love the title, Rama, and the whole idea of the struggle to get to the ocean. Waters of Faith, Gershon
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/9/2021 12:01:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, Take care, God bless!
Date: 3/8/2021 11:54:00 AM
Hello Rama, yes life is a river. My life journeys have been a struggle. My roads have been bumpy and blocked. Yet at times My roads have been cleared. sometimes i can not go ahead on my roads. My fav. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/9/2021 12:18:00 PM
Hello Rama. I am glad I made your day bright. Enjoy it. Darlene
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/9/2021 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Darlene. A favourite for you. I am so happy. Take care. Enjoy your day. God bless!
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